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 Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 4:45 pm
Name: Akira Kobayashi Speciality: Nothing in particular Age: 24 Height: 6'4 Place of Birth: Tokyo, Japan Home town: Kakunodate
Hair: Long black hair (touching his shoulders and sometimes kept in a pony tail)
Eyes: Green
Nationality: Half cast (mother was English, while father was Japanese
Occupation: Shop assistant
Likes: Sleep, food, history on rural Japan and stare at the sky
Dislikes: Blood, Clowns and facing his laziness
Goal in Life: To travel
Tattoos: He has two tattoos on his on body one of which a lion head on his back and the other a tiger on his shoulder.
Personalty: His life style doesn't really reflect his personalty its much deeper often his gaze wandering to sky to watch the clouds or stars in wonder and wishing his life was something more then what it was, taking belief in the music he listens which normally metal. Most of the time he comes of as a loner, spending a lot of time on his own thinking about the future. His Patience isn't something to be admired, often getting inpatient if he wants something or if he wants someone to do something for him. Also he gets worried easily if he feels if something is wrong and starts to panic.
Though he enjoys playing sport and have the frame to do so the lack of motivation because of his laziness and failed attempts to get into sport over the years has put him off further even going to the gym looking like a distant possibility.
Appearance: His height just over 6'4, he's built for physical sporting activity, with broad shoulders he stands out where he lives often being singled out because of this differences he holds. His hair is rather long for a guy, touching his shoulders. His body is stained with tattoo ink, a tattoo of a white tiger on his right shoulder. His face has no special features apart from a small scar just under his left eye which is a emerald colour to match the other eye. Clothes wise baggy jeans and plain tops are the pick of day.He's built for physical for sport with a athlete frame with board shoulders and powerful legs which aren't hardly used because of lack of motivation.
History: Akira's past isn't something to be admired, for the early part of his life he lived with his parents in till the age of 18 when which he was forced out of his house because his resistance towards getting a job and the rent was left paid for months in a row. His care free nan soon took him in in Kakumodate which forced him to leave his old life behind and his friends.
Time moved on without him doing anything of importance, his money spent on drink. His life soon became boring and predictable and the sense of wanting to travel came onto him, but the lack of money soon stopped the idea before it even started. Hitting the age of 24 he got a job as a simple shop assistant in a local shop, aiming to raise enough money, even though he spends a bit on booze, he's gain a considerably amount.
Wishes to be:
1)White Tiger (female)
2) Species of Tiger (female)
I want to try something different, by splicing my character with another gender to experiment how he would react to the changes.
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:51 pm
Nope. One-dimensional, short, and cliche'd.
If you can do a full rewrite (following the new guidelines) and come up with enough information for someone to really get a feel for your character, then we might talk. But, for now, all you have going for you is your literacy, which, by the way, is only good if you use it.
Remember, you'll be sticking with this character for a long time. Make 'em something you can be proud of!
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