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hospitalflowers

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 10:43 am



Okay, so, with this I was mostly working to make a constant body for a poem for once since my lines are usually all over the place... so yeah, this was just an excercise poem {no, it's not about exercise} in a matter of minutes to see if I could come up with a constant flow of the words... so yeah... here's Deathly Silent.

Deathly Silent


Where has all the music gone?
And where is all the sound?
It’s as silent as the dead,
Those who were lost
And never found.

The leafs are quiet,
And the grass is still
It is as silent as the dead,
Those who never returned
And those who never will.

The dead have yet to live.
The living have yet to die.
But it’s fading now,
The sound and all.
Now’s time to cry.

The leafs are quiet,
And the grass is still
It is as silent as the dead,
Those who never returned
And those who never will.

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 7:49 pm


I love this! it's beautiful! lol

Kesna


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 5:38 am


Thanks! ^.^
PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:46 pm


That is so beautiful and mind-blowing and undescribable, Broken! A million thumbs WAY up!! ^^ heart

Numikea


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 6:02 pm


Numikea
That is so beautiful and mind-blowing and undescribable, Broken! A million thumbs WAY up!! ^^ heart
Thanks very very much. ^.^
PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:07 pm


crying heart burning_eyes

When I read that it totally BLEW MY MIND burning_eyes

It seems your poems aimlessly wander twards something that is unknown. Kind of like a search for light in the darkness, or a search for shade in the sun.

27x


Holy PsychWard

PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:29 pm


That was very mysterious and deep. I like it alot. Excellent work.
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