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WickedPookie

PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 2:21 pm


This is actually a Queer as Folk fanfiction/Poetry. It wasn't meant to be but when I read it later it reminded me of it. It's not that good, i wrote it in during my math class.

Sunshine

I stare at him from across the table
His beauty has no label
Memories of our first night flicker in my mind
My heart was lost, but him I did find
His blond locks cover his eye
And each time it falls back he does sigh

He concentrates hard on his art
The lines and colours hold a big piece of his heart
But, he says he loves me with all of it
And mine, each time, breaks a bit
Because never those words I can say
A promise I made myself, but he got in the way
Never could I imagine that he’d push his way through
With every kiss I turn to goo

It was never suppose to be like this
The thought of only one guy made my mind hiss
It had been planned, a new one every night
Never the whole cake, just a bite

Then I saw him under the street lamp
In his eyes, my heart set up camp
When I met him I told him the deal
One night, one time, nothing was real
He smiled like an eager fool
But later on broke the important rule
I should have seen it coming
He was a clever devil, with lots of cunning
He came back again and never stopped
When my resolve broke, into my arms he hopped
Even after, my feelings I tried to deny
But when he pouts I must comply

I told him I’d never say I love you
I wouldn’t lie to him, if I said it, it just wouldn’t be true
I would never love, it’s a fake emotion
It does nothing but cause an unhealthy commotion

He still says it all the time
My heart clutches like I’ve committed a crime
Love like his I’ve never known
Growing up I barely had a home
I never have, and it I don’t plan to say
It is nothing more than a tired cliché

Late at night, though, tangled in arms
I feel as if there is no harm
My mind screams against it all
I was never suppose to fall
Yet, here he sits like every things fine
I love him, because he’s my Sunshine
PostPosted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 8:05 pm


Woah, I really like this actually even though you consider it "Not that Good." I really like it.
Of course there were awkward moments, but the emotion, the feeling and the imagery was great.

x-Jitty-x

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