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PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 7:30 pm


((Yeah. So, this "RP" isn't quite like many others you may be accustomed to. Though it is posted in the "RP" section, it's more of a... "Episodic Short Story Series", designed to both demonstrate my RP skills, as well as flesh out Victor's (My character, obviously) history. So, in keeping with this, please keep all posts in this thread in the form of commentary, and enjoy!))

THE WOLF OF GROZNY:

Part One: Prologue.


November Second, 2005:
“Put that barricade up!”
“Watch the windows, damn it!
Ahmad! Stay in position!” The Zavodskoy Mosque was buzzing with activity, as Chechen resistance fighters milled about, fortifying their positions against an imminent Russian assault. Two days ago, these freedom fighters had taken over the building in a last-ditch effort to consolidate their holdings in the administrative district of their capital city of Grozny. Quickly besieged by the pursuing RFA ((Russian Federal Army)) forces, they had managed to hold this bastion against troops, helicopters, and armored cars, but as the afternoon sun blinked though the stained-glass windows above, the rebel lieutenant, a man known only as “Ramzan”, knew that their luck wouldn't hold out forever. The actions of the Russians just outside the Mosque's courtyard had been erratic, it seemed; though they had not even tried to negotiate with the rebels, they had also not committed to a full assault, almost as though they were waiting for...
With a startled gasp, Ramzan broke from his proto-meditative state; there was a sound behind the main doors of the building, a low growl that grew and grew in intensity, eventually morphing into the roar of a diesel engine. “Reinforcements!” Ramzan yelled to his cohorts, taking cover behind an overturned bookshelf, “Brace for the assault, brothers! We will not fall on this day!”
Seconds passed; with the sound of treads on snow now clearly legible, Ramzan clutched at his antiquated AK-47 assault rifle in anticipation, ready for what was bound to happen next. And happen, it did. With an earth shaking crash, the front half of a Russian Federation BMP infantry fighting vehicle knocked through the heavy wooden double-doors, opening fire with its coaxial machine gun. As men fell around him, Ramzan roared with anger, fruitlessly firing his weapon at the metal behemoth. Noticing that this was to no avail, Ramzan pulled back, diving behind a support column just as heavy 7.62 millimeter rounds tore up the ground around him. With a renewed drive, he raised his hand, and was about to yell for his men to press the attack, when, out of the blue, a cylindrical metal tube landed at his feet. Ramzan had seen this kind of object many times before, so when it burst in a flash of blinding light and ear-splitting noise, he was surprised, but not shocked. “Allah damn them! A Flashbang...” He managed to mutter, furiously rubbing his eyes. As his hearing began to clear, however, Ramzan heard a noise that he had hoped that he would never come across. Along with the ringing in his ears, he heard the distinctive “Pah-pah-pah” of silenced weapons, and, more horrifically, the thumping sound of his comrade's bodies hitting the ground, their lives extinguished before they could even cry out in pain. To his horror, he realized what this meant. As the cold barrel of a VSS "Vintorez" rifle pressed against his neck, he only managed to say one word:
Spetsnaz
An instant later, his face hit the cold stone of the floor, never to utter another word again. His executioner, a young soldier in a blue beret and black fatigues, wiped the blood off of the end of his rifle, then, with a sadistic smile, crouched beside the dead Chechen, “No mercy, comrade...” He whispered, “No mercy.
This soldier, a cruel creature who seemed to feast solely upon an unquenchable blood lust, was Victor Andreyev. But, to rebels like Ramzan, he was known by a darker, more sinister title...
...The Wolf of Grozny.

This is his story.

((And, no, before you ask, Victor didn't do all of that alone. I just chose not to mention the other Spetsnaz troops... yet.))
PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:29 am


Part Two: Beginnings


December Twenty-Fourth, 2003:
Be praised, our free Fatherland!
Union of ancient fraternal peoples...
” Sitting in his tiny office in St. Petersburg, Yuri Fyodorovich grunted as this lyric of the Russian national anthem played on the tiny hand held radio sitting on his desk, “If we're so damn united, why does the 'Free Fatherland' have me recruiting soldiers?” He whispered to himself, “And why, then, in our holy unity, did the Chechens decide to start bombing goddamn trains?
Like he had every day since the Stavropol bombing, Yuri bitched like this whenever the local radio station decided to blare the National Anthem again, a practice, he noted, that they seemed to be doing in earnest. What they were trying to accomplish, he couldn't say; ever since the Chechen rebels had taken up their old tactics of terror bombing federal facilities, public outcry against them had been at an all-time high. People were united, all right: United in their lust for Chechen blood; a lust, Yuri noted with disgust, that it was now his job to satiate. Still, today, something had felt... different. Unlike most other days, the flood of angsty, hormonal teenagers looking for a “good time” in the army had been strangely small, instead, it had been a trickle of dedicated, intelligent men, (Thank God! If he had to fill out another conscription form for some well-off social misfit, Yuri was convinced that he'd jump out a window.) soldiers that the country could really use.
So, it was of some surprise when a young, black-haired man in black slacks and a white T-shirt stepped into his office, smoking a crappy Albanian cigarette, “Let me guess, you're just out of college, and looking for a good time?” Yuri muttered as the black-haired man sat down across from him. Oddly, instead of the usual howling laughter he had expected from these young soldier wannabes, Yuri noticed that this man didn't even crack a smile. This one had potential, he noted, suddenly very interested, “Er- well, I must warn you, with things as heated as they are in Chechnya, you'll probably be sent into the fighting right out of basic training,” He said, “Are you sure you want to risk your life in such a way?”
“Yes,” The young man replied, bearing his teeth like a growling dog, “Just fill out the goddamn papers.”
Fyodorovich's eyebrow raised with intrigue, oh, yes, this one had lots of potential! Quickly, indeed, with the muscle memory that doing such a task over and over again had granted him, Yuri produced a stack of recruitment forms from underneath his desk, “All right, young friend, I can see that you're dedicated, that's good! Let's get started immediately, then.”
The young man nodded in approval and leaned forward, “First off, what's your name, comrade?”
“Victor... (An odd second of hesitation) Andreyev.”
“Huh. All right, age?”
“Twenty-Two”
“I see. Any close relatives we can contact?”
Victor paused on this question, then, with a visible shudder, answered slowly, “No... Not anymore”
Yuri once again raised his eyebrow, then decided to ask a question that had just popped into his head “Really? How'd tha-” He quickly paused. A cold stare from across the table answered that: “Don't go there, comrade”
With a sigh, Yuri continued the interview, his attempt at small talk had, predictably, put this “Andreyev” fellow in a markedly sour mood.
Finally, after another series of boring, uncomfortable questions, Yuri finally came to his last question, not an actual query set out by the government, but rather, one that he had always loved to ask to new recruits, “Comrade, if I may imply, why did you decide to join the Federal Army?” To this, he received the most intriguingly different answer he had ever heard,
“Revenge. I want to spill the blood of every goddamn... dog in Chechnya. I want to paint the snow with their blood, and watch with glee as their bodies writhe, wither, and die.”
With a none-too-quiet gasp of shock, Fyodorovich dropped his pen, staring into Victor's cold, unrelenting eyes, and forced a smile, “Er- Well... In that case, comrade, I welcome you to the Russian Army!” He held his hand out to Andreyev, praying that he wouldn't rip it off. Once again, the young man surprised him. With a firm, fluid motion, he took the recruiter's hand and shook it, standing to leave, “My pleasure. Comrade” he said as he left, a sadistic smile creeping across his face.
It was only when the door closed behind his back that Yuri realized something amazing; Despite the heavy snowfall outside, Victor had neglected to wear any sort of winter clothing. Without hesiataion, Yuri sprang over to his phone and called his superior officer's private line, “Sergei? This is Yuri, I... Sir, you know how Vityaz was looking for a new squad leader? Well, ring up Panchenkov, I think we've found our man...”

((Yup. Another one from someone else's perspective. I promise that the next one won't be, but, by god, it's gonna be long...))

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