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one night of bliss
uhmmm...this is my first journal....its a love poem....
I can see that you're my girl,
Your beauty shines so bright,
I can see that you're my world,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see you'll always care,
You don't even have to lie,
I can see you're always there,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see that your my friend,
And that your willing to be until I die,
I can see the love that you send,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see your shield of protection,
At times I throw external fights,
I can see that you're truly a blessing,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see our love strengthen its meaning,
Every second that passes us by,
I can see the strong sensation it's bringing,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see that if we both help each other,
Things can and will turn out right,
I can see that you'll remain my lover,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see your soul as it lifts up,
To spread its imaginary wings and fly,
I can see you succeed if you don't give up,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see us unite back together,
If we'll listen and follow this guide,
I can see myself earn you as a treasure,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see and I do believe,
That if I hold my hopes up high,
I can see the road that's best for me,
Whenever I open my eyes.

I can see that I can succeed,
All I've got to do is try,
I can see this is the life I lead,
Whenever I open my eyes.






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Hollycaust
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commentCommented on: Sun May 27, 2007 @ 06:04pm
I ABSOLUTLY LOVE TIS POEM!!!!!!!! I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY BUT THAT IT WAS JUST LIKE THE GREATES POEM I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!! REALLY GOOD JOB!!!!!! xd 4laugh


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