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i'm gonna be posting a story!!!
in the next journals i will be posting chapters of my story Alone in the World. So if anyone would like to comment, critisize, whatever, be my guest. any critisizm helps! ^_^ thank you and enjoy!!!
Chapter Two: Lockets and Losses
Netami had walked out the door without breakfast, briefcase swung over her shoulder and a newly made school uniform. But, before she got past the entrance her butler friend, Kazuma, ran up to her carrying Netami’s portable keyboard in his grip.
Netami could see him pant and breath in frantically for air. “Netami,” he gasped. “You forgot *wheeze* your keyboard.” he finished handing the heavy object to the forgetful girl in front of him. An expression of embarrassment appeared on her face when she swung the piano over her shoulder like a side pack.
Her outfit included an under-shirt and a blue blazer with the sleeves ripped of, a single heart shaped locket with a picture of her missing sister, a loose tie, those weird sweet band things with different band symbols on them, and a spiky belt. She also decided to cut her hair a little bit shorter to have that boy look by leaving it layered and stay above her shoulder’s she also dyed the types of her black hair white. She wore a looped lip piercing on one side and two studs on the other side of her bottom lip. She added two eyebrow peircings, and a variety of ringed piercing’s all along both of her ears giving her the bad-a** look.
Without saying a word to anyone afterwards, she left for the short walk to her knew school, also known as, Ouran High School, after all it wasn’t a very long walk.
As she strode to school there were many limos that passed her, and she then realized it was a RICH private school for RICH, most likely snobby, preppy, chatty girls in their repulsive dresses.
When she finally arrived she saw that there were many sakura trees. It reminded her of her sister because she always loved those trees. This caused grief to fill her mind once again and have her head hang as she walked into the halls of the massive school.
She didn’t notice the stares she was getting from the girls of the school as they pointed and gossiped about how ‘hot’ she looked, apparently they were to dense to see she was a girl.
When the bell rang indicating her first class she pulled out her schedule to see where to go and easily found her way. When she stepped in everyone was already seated and ready for the class. once fully in the class the teacher recognized her as the knew student of the class.
“Class, this is our knew student...uh...what was your name again?” he asked under his breath. She sighed and decided to introduce herself.
“My name is Netami, Shitsuren. I am...” she closed her eyes and opened them again, now staring at the ground. “I am fourteen and I am here to have a good education not to mess around and make any type of relationship with anyone. So, please, try not to disturb me while I am working or thinking to myself. Thank you.” she finished with a bow and left a stunned class after going to the only remaining seat without looking at anyone.
Her seat was in the back by another boy and...two twins. When she saw this she flinched at the reality and what could have been if her sister was here with her. She could feel stares from people throughout the remainder of the beginning of the class.
Once class was over she stayed looking at the top of her desk until everyone else was gone. Unfortunately, the two twins and the other brunette haired boy stayed behind and started talking to each other. She pulled out her schedule to see that it was now break time.
Netami slowly got up from her seat but was pushed abruptly back down by the twin boys. she looked up and glared at them with her eye that was not covered by her bangs and asked quietly, “what?” but the twins simply looked at her questioningly.
As she was about to repeat her question the twins talked first. “Why don’t you want to talk to anyone?” they both asked in unison. She thought of when her sister and her used to do the same thing causing her look down at her desk again.
“Is there something wrong with you?” the twin on the right asked. “Or do you think you’re just a bad-a**?” the other asked. she slowly looked up at them and stared at there identical, cat-like eyes.
“A mirror image. The only one who can understand you is your reflection...My mirror...” then she looked down at her locket, opened it and looked at the smiling image of her sister. “...went missing...” she could feel the silence creep into uneasiness as they all stared at her.
“What do you mean?” asked the twin on her right breaking the silence. The silent girl simply stared at her locket without answering him, this particularly caught the brunette boys attention and walked over to the scene. When he looked over Netami’s shoulder he asked her something no one expected.
“Is that your mother? You look very much like her.” she asked observing it closer. After hearing this question she flinched at the thought, she looked nothing like her mother. She closed her locket before anyone could inspect any further.
“Actually, no. That’s...my sister...my twin sister.” at her answer both of the twins stopped breathing. “She...she...” netami said trying to get rid of the grief in her heart. For some reason she felt comfortable around these twins and this boy. Without knowing so a tear came out of her depressed gaze landing on one of the twins hands. This brought him to come back to reality and look down at her with sympathetic eyes and without thought put his hand on the girls own to comfort her.
The other twin gasped at the realization of her being a girl. “You’re a girl?” he asked loudly, annoying the girl and bringing her to a stage of anger abruptly. She swiftly got up from her seat leaving the warm hand that once lay on her own. without even a word from anyone else she was out the door.
“Idiot!” yelled the brunette boy to the idiotic twin while the other stared off into the direction of the footsteps of the girl without a reflection.






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katy jo
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 08, 2007 @ 09:27am
I like it. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Thu Jul 12, 2007 @ 05:39am
Natami Shitsyourin.



iBooger
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