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Who Cares? Who Cares? By: Red16 Who care, about you? Nobody, that's who. Who cares, about me? Nobody, can't you see? Who cares, about her? Nobody, she's a loser. Who cares, about him? Nobody, not even those who sing a hymn. Who cares, about them? Nobody, not now just as then. Nobody, truly cares, but everybody, still stares. Who cares, about you? Nobody, that's who.

Posted by: Red16 Wed Apr 20, 2005 @ 05:36am

Questing for
*20000 to start a new guild
Please view my poems in my journal. and I would like feedback. Now, may the flying hampsters rain coconuts of doom upon your pitiful city.

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Ms Monster
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Commented on: Sun May 01, 2005 @ 11:29am


	That was horrible.

Commented on: Sat Oct 15, 2005 @ 04:56am


	um............ooooooookay.

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Silk_G-String
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Commented on: Fri May 04, 2007 @ 06:04am


	Weak content, and very bad structure. I hope you do not mind criticism from a pro. I am just trying to be helpful. If writing, be it poetry or songs is what you desire, I shall like to see you succeed. Good luck. heart

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