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Inno's Second Journal
Since things went awry...Here's a new one for ya'll to read
She Walks in Darkness
She walks in darkness
I walk in the light
I can't touch her,
But she can touch me anytime she pleases

I try not to stray away
From the path that I have to follow
She beckons me,
She tempts me
And sometimes I am led astray

She knows not love
She knows no pleasure
She knows only pain
She knows only anger
She knows nothing of happiness or love

She walks in darkness
I stay in the light
Every once in a while I'm tempted
But I know better now.

Cause with every carnal pleasure
I have to pay a price
She never has to pay
She never has the consequences
She is eternal
And yet mortal.
She is me,
But I can't be her.

She can go places I cannot,
She can lose her worries while Ican't
She can be perfection in human form
Or a devil reincarnate
I can only be just me
Cause I am me,
And she is she.

She's done thousands of things
That I can't bring myself to do
She's said millions of things
That I only wish I could've said.
She's so perfect,
While I am so broken.

She walks in darkness
Sometimes even in the light
She goes by thousands of names
But mostly just one
She is me
But I'm not her.

~InnocentDreamer~

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  • User Comments: [6]
    Harasuki
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    Fri Sep 07, 2007 @ 06:30am


    That poem is off the HOOK! Damn, that stuff is deep! I love it


    Tidyu
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    Fri Sep 07, 2007 @ 02:01pm


    In one word, that poem was AWESOME! It's very captivating, and is definetley a brain puzzler for me. I can see the emotions you're putting across though, and just shove that girl aside. You are you, and that's how it always will be ^_^.


    InnocentDreamer
    Community Member





    Fri Sep 07, 2007 @ 02:03pm


    *laughs Happily* thanks, Suki. Made my morning to read that. ANd it's nothing much, just how I feel about somethings..Started out to be about Hef and I, then it turned into about me and Inno and how different we are...

    And thank you Tidyu..I think you're way too kind. And if you want to read more, actually head over to Lost Innocence 's profile. THat used to be me when I started out and I have more there.

    Both of you guys are, actually.


    clarinet-babe101
    Community Member





    Fri Sep 07, 2007 @ 07:31pm


    hey girl!
    i like this poem.... it's pretty awesome....at first i thought it was just song lyrics but then i saw ur name at the bottom...!
    ninja heart


    InnocentDreamer
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    Sat Sep 08, 2007 @ 01:57am


    Cool!!!


    kittytucker18
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    Sun Sep 09, 2007 @ 05:03am


    Oh this is great. I love it! I feel this way sometime. But its amazing how many emotions this poem provokes! You are an amazing writer.


    mrgreen


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