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Stories
These are stories that i come up with. Some of them might be stupid i really like them.Tell me what you think and be honest please.
She waited for him in the dead of the night.It seemed like it took forever for her to realize that he was never going to show up. As she woke up the next morning, a thought came to mind. Maybe he still loved her and he was just to scared to show her that he ment everything they went through.So she decided to call him, but there was no answer. three months without hearing from him and all of the sudden the phone rings. She rushes to the phone to answer it and she says "HELLO." It was his mother that was calling this late. Her mother explained to her why he never showed up that night. All Shelby could think about was how could i let this happened. As Shelby hung up the phone it hit her. It was all her fault her boyfriend was killed in a tragic car accident. He was rushing to where she was on that dead of night to be with her. She couldn't live without him. No one knows what happened to her and thats the end of this story............. (tell me what you think!!!!)

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  • User Comments: [2]
    Lavender Twinkle Toes
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    Fri Jan 25, 2008 @ 02:14pm


    It sounds like it would be a good story to read about, but you need the beginning... working up to the end. Also, why did the mother take three weeks to call her?
    ... It is a good but sad ending crying .


    DarknessSpaz
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    Mon Feb 18, 2008 @ 02:59am


    thanx for the comment


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