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Ramblings and such... just stuff I feel like saying.. read it or not I dont care..


Fiend470
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crap poem..
Darkness outside my window
still bleeding from the never healing wound
warm and thick through my fingers
the essence of life
is it mine?
maybe yours
I no longer hear your cries
my own drown them out
forever battleing one another
I long for freedom
a soothing word youll never hear





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sessylove93
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comment Commented on: Sat Jul 09, 2005 @ 07:15pm
its so pretty. heart i likes it lots. heart


comment Commented on: Mon Jul 11, 2005 @ 07:11am
Its teh awsome...my MUNKAY thinks so too... xd



Playing Devils Violin
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De Tomaat
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 11, 2005 @ 08:17am
heart me like the poem. if that is the right reply ^^;;


comment Commented on: Tue Jul 12, 2005 @ 04:46am
that poem is really good. i like it.



misskitti
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siriustoast
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comment Commented on: Wed Jul 13, 2005 @ 10:29pm
Not bad. I like it.


comment Commented on: Wed Aug 17, 2005 @ 06:40pm
I really like that poem its a lot better than mine.



mthica
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aqualink
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comment Commented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 05:13am
wow, that's a lot better than mine 3nodding


comment Commented on: Thu Jan 12, 2006 @ 11:16pm
OMG that was another great one! you write soo well!!! you should really think of going into writing as a profession. i love it.

*hugs and loves



winnter_spirals
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