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Adurna Blaze
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I just really love this story! 4laugh
It's short, but that's okay. It goes so fast that at the end, you're kinda like, "Okay, wha- WAIT A MINUTE!" Though it could use a bit of editing at the end, I really like this story.


People Taste Better Than Pie

She would not give him the last piece of pie. Sure, they may have been starving archeologists, but this was an artifact, not to be destroyed.

His stomach made an odd noise, much like a vomiting cow, and he fell to his knees, begging for the pie. Her stomach mimicked his, but she shook her head.

"We will be famous!" she declared, holding up her prize.

He groaned. "Not if we die from starvation out here."

"Oh, I won't," she told him with a gleam in her eyes.

She returned to the campsite alone.





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Collote
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Fri Feb 15, 2008 @ 10:55pm


Hah, I remember this story!


Adurna Blaze
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Sun Feb 17, 2008 @ 11:26pm


LOL! u should!! this was one of those starting sentences u sent me!


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