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Praying_4_Death's Journal
A collection of short stories and poems...
I swear I've done this a thousand times before
I've been running into all of these closed doors
And now my skull is aching from constant contact
I'm making up for all the excuses I have ever lacked

So let me hear your unfaithful whisper
How do you and I really differ?

I wronged you, and you wronged me back
How does this add up as right?
Faithfulness is just a virtue
But I'm not leaving without a fight
Trapped in a closet is your theme phrase
So many times you were almost caught and
I suspected but never really thought you
would sink so far into the sand
You're so gone
you're so gone

So when you wake up and he's holding you
Do you tell him "I love you too?"
Or is that reserved for that special someone (me)
Tell me so this can really be done

I'm banging into walls as I try to flee this unfaithful predicament
Maybe you could stop the swelling if you tell me just what we meant

I wronged you, and you wronged me back
How does this add up as right?
Faithfulness is just a virtue
But I'm not leaving without a fight
Trapped in a closet is your theme phrase
So many times you were almost caught and
I suspected but never really thought you
would sink so far into the sand
You're so gone
you're so gone

Don't fall into his arms of poison
Do I have to lie to get you back?
Don't fall into his arms of poison
When will you crack?

I wronged you, and you wronged me back
How does this add up as right?
Faithfulness is just a virtue
But I'm not leaving without a fight
Trapped in a closet is your theme phrase
So many times you were almost caught and
I suspected but never really thought you
would sink so far into the sand
You're so gone
you're so gone
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Violets_Painted_Black
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 04, 2005 @ 04:07am
I really enjoyed all of your poetry. You've got wonderful talent, and you write beautiful.


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 06, 2005 @ 07:01am
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I thought it was awesome and the emotions expressed are deep as well.



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Sparrowluvr2
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 04:52am
Oh wow. That was awesome. I can tell that you worked really hard on it. Good job!


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 29, 2005 @ 02:40am


This... Yhis is amazing! You wrote this?.. Oh wow... I wish I had such an incredible talent! I envy your work.. I wish my poetry was as detailed and compelling as this!



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