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Random stories
random stories that i think up.....

Shes standing there on the green field
the perfect picture of beauty
Her copper curls flow behind her
the wind making them seem like they are alive
But inside there is turmoil
as dark as the midnight sea
it follows her all day long
and on the inside she is
being eaten alive my death
she has a fake face that
the otheres around her see
for she does not want to
trouble them with her fears


But today she has found hope
in the form of a man
he is evrything that she
has evr wanted and needs
you can not see him for
he is not to be seen
he is now her heavenly
father, her savior, her friend
He has been waiting for her ever
since he died more than 2000
years ago on a cross
he wants her to be his and
she has accepted
she can now be
clean and light inside like
the false face she had
been weraing all her life




So today up in heaven there
is a party going on where
angels, and the trinity are
celebrating their newest
member of heaven the
girl that just gave her heart to
Jesus and she is laying in the
grass crying with the relief
of never having to bear
the agony and pain alone ever
agin for all eternity.






so i know that this really dosen't seem like a poem....and well yea i really stink at poems but i like the choppy line structure cuse i think its kinda cool. well i hope you all like it....i think its waaay more uplifting than my last one...lol well do leave comments on waht u think about it okay? whee





PromiseYouMyHeart
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