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glider78
hey man this is etarnal hatred
but now people see what god has created

i sit down on my bed and say
man this is such a bad day

as this eternal hatred go on
this hatred will go long

relationships is one thing im not in
so I go and grab a pin

i sat there working on my puzzle book and then
it was that day that i stopped a sin

all these rappers from a to z
i think we owe god and apology

all these gangs going from cryptes gd and bloods
all they are being is a stick in the mud.

god hates ways of evil and anger
but all u see is people in danger

so if you want to change your ways from good to bad
just apologize to god and dont be sad

its ok to cry and cry untill you are done
but next time do the thing that is right and fun

i am here for other people to understand that evil and killing others isnt the way
so the angel will be there every day

so is u have done bad and want to change
knowing you think shooting guns that long range

i want you to bow your heads and close your eyes
and then i want you to tell him i apologige


YOU ARE FORGIVEN
BUT BAD THINGS..........ARE SINS



PEACE






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Undeniable Heroine
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 01:57am
Nice. I like the rhyming.


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 06:16am
Man, I wish I could write like this.
Have you ever heard of a site called Quizilla? You can make poems there, too, and share them.
Amazing work, my friend, amazing work



Bani Foxglove
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A Princely Princess
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 06:52pm
nice dude that was deep i think i am going to cry boo hoo k im done but well writen dude well writen


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