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Quietly Waiting Sitting here waiting, With you always in mind. My thought I'm debating, Is love something I can find? I want, I need, I crave you. Yet you can give me it all. But I think of you too, And if you need me, you wont fall. Even though you're gone, Even though people love you, I wont think you'd do me wrong. And I wont either; I love you too.

Posted by: -Kao-Kashey-His_Dreamer Sat Aug 23, 2008 @ 07:14pm

"Most people put what they think here. I say ******** what you think. Haha, I like my opinion for me, not you."
~Kao

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Commented on: Sat Aug 23, 2008 @ 07:18pm


	Very good job ^^ Nice use of emotions, it gives the poem meaning. And all around, you used very good word choices, which helps to bring out the character of the poem even more biggrin Gratz on a job well done

Commented on: Wed Aug 27, 2008 @ 11:03pm


	Its beautiful Kao, I love it and same for me. I can't stop thinking about you. I dont want to either and i,m glad your inspired I'm coming back. dont forget that ^_^

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Commented on: Thu Aug 28, 2008 @ 12:33am


	ish in pup form and glomps poetry = awesome

Commented on: Thu Aug 28, 2008 @ 12:35am


	Smiles," very heartfelt, I like this, a craving a want, a knowing a feeling. it is nicely done."

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