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The werewolf down the block
Chapter one: the vampires
I am Courtney Mecharu and I am just starting my first day of middle school. I am in the 7th grade and I am just as nervous as my best friend Lucie but any way that is a different story. It all started when I moved here a week ago from California.

“Mom are we there yet?” asked my younger sister Chelsea.
“No Chelsea not yet,” my mom said for the umpteenth time.
“When will we get there?” my brother Dylan asked politely.
“When we get there Dylan,” my mom said.

Oh how rude I've been I'm twelve years old, my sister Chelsea is ten, and my brother Dylan is twelve as well. I have long jet black hair, I am very slim with pale skin and dark blue eyes. Chelsea has long blonde hair and is kind of muscular with pale green eyes and tan skin. Dylan has blue hair with red highlights that covers his brown eyes and has pale tan skin and is smarter than the rest of us kids.

"We're here" mom said excitedly.
"Yay !" yelled Chelsea.
"Finally," Dylan said.
"Mom are you serious this is not a house this isn't as big as our old house!!" I exclaimed.
"Well get used to it Washington Missouri is a small town and Lucie lives in this neighborhood anyways," mom said calmly.
“Can I go see Lucie and hangout with her?" I asked.
“Sure" mom said.
So I ran as fast as I could across Southwinds Circle and over to Lucie's and accidently slammed into the door then Lucie ran to the door and saw me.
"Courtney why are you here?" asked Lucie.
"I live here now Lucie isn't that awesome!!" I exclaimed.
"Ya that is really cool!!!" Lucie exclaimed.

The first day of school is today I walked to school with Lucie and her friend Sarah. Any way Lucie has long red hair and green eyes with tan skin and she is five foot two. I’m five foot five, Chelsea is four foot seven, and Dylan is five foot eleven. Sarah really freaks me out though because Sarah dropped all her books and then they froze in midair and came back to her I have to investigate. During free period I was well investigating following Sarah down the halls when suddenly this boy bumps into me, books and everything fell to the ground.

“I’m so sorry my name is Nathaniel Dorukare and who are you?” Nathaniel asked.
“My name is Courtney Mecharu,” I replied.
“Courtney, Nathaniel I see you met each other,” Lucie said.
“Wait you know each other,” Nathaniel and I said surprised.
“Yes I know you both,” Lucie replied.
"I'm really sorry Courtney see I just moved here from Britain and it's hard well adjusting."






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jadedragon1972
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 04:03am
wow, im sorry, im not much of a writer, so i cant say, but for some helpfull critisismn, try to mix more dialoge in ur description, and more description in ur dialog! but good story line, u got that down good! - heart jade! hope 2 c u around!


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