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my losses
sometimes life just aint fare
sometimes life aint fare like its always here and there thinking about what and were you think you could like someone and care but youll only end up with disspare knowing that she didnt care only wishing that you were there to weep in disspare knowing that know ones gonna be there and theres pain and even more disspare hoping one day that you could be holding her touching her hair without a care knowing that she was there

by jordan bryce lopez

i just wrote it its not very good but i hope you liked it






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Drenica
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 19, 2006 @ 03:20am
omg, thats really good jordan....I didn't you could write poetry! It's really good! it's way better than any of the stuff I have writen.... wyhy didn't you ever telll me you could write peotry?


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 22, 2006 @ 11:28pm
omg so good i love it heart



Loren_Rocks
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thehotblond
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commentCommented on: Mon May 01, 2006 @ 02:21am
thanx


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