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Winds howl their greetings As I crawl out of my bed Hushed whispers turn to screaming Creating chaos in my head I tumbled down the rabbit hole Into this empty space I cannot stand the feeling Of the pain I can't erase
My nightmares are so frequent That they are only dreams Yet crawling up my blood-red throat Are tormented screams The darkness of my mind Is what pushes you away But if you ever leave me I will not last another day
I am little Alice The one they never found The one who fell down the rabbit hole And stayed there, underground In my alternate reality Of tiny imps and elves I have become one of the creatures Who keep only to themselves
I lie here in my wonderland Alone inside my head I long to leave this wretched place And go back to my bed I can't escape this distant world I can no longer try My only hope to leave this land Is just to simply die.
jesykah041 · Wed Jan 06, 2010 @ 11:44am · 0 Comments |