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the thoughts of my thread.
Poem-Forgotten
I don't know how i feel
nothing seems true
this is how i feel
how about you?

Do you feel this way?
dizzy and confused
no one really knows me
they can read me if they may

Do i care?
it depends what about
i feel like a fish
all slimy and disgusting
like a trout

My life is messed up
my life is screwed
i stare into my future
into the cup
the cup of leaves
that go forward
in time you see
there's not much to acheive

My life is empty
i am numb
this is how i feel
this life is dumb
Do you feel this way?
is it true?
don't dare lie about it
What would you do?

BY: alycia (cutyfromhell)






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commentCommented on: Wed May 24, 2006 @ 11:46pm
If you start rhyming dont stop for one verse and start again other than that its good


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