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Inno's Second Journal
Since things went awry...Here's a new one for ya'll to read
A poem
Broken and Betrayed

Broken and betrayed,
I lay here shattered on the floor.
Don't try to fix me,
You'll on ly break me even more.
I am battered and bruised
Beyond your repair.
Broken and betrayed
I want to be alone.

Shattered and alone,
I think of you here beside me.
Laying in a million peices,
I think I hear your voice.
It's calmly telling me not to cry
Although I already feel your tears.
Shattered and alone,
I can't believe this is real.

Unbeleiving and in peices,
My eyes well up with tears.
My heart is shattered into a million peices
And lost to you like confetti in the wind.
I don't want to be here
But over the years,
I find myself here more and more.
Unbelieving and in pieces,
I don't want to know the truth.

I am broken and betrayed,
Unbelieving and in pieces.
I am shattered and alone.
You're trying to pick up my pieces,
Trying to glue me back together
But it's like you're using flour and water.
To make me stick together.
A little dab of water
And then a sprinkling of flour
Just won't do.
What makes it even worse is
I have a bottle of super glue
In the palm of one shattered hand.

Broken and betrayed,
I lay here shattered on the floor.
Through your tears you try to comfort me,
Try to tell me I'm not alone.
Even through my own tears, I can see your guilt
And my heart breaks for you even more.

Because I've been broken and betrayed,
I'm shattered on the floor.
I'm bruised beyond repair,
And I can't stand it anymore.
I'm not your rug
I'm not your mat
And I refuse to be broken and betrayed anymore.
So now I quote Poe's quaint poem
"The raven quoth,'Nevermore.' "
Nevermore.


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  • User Comments: [7]
    InnocentDreamer
    Community Member





    Fri May 26, 2006 @ 09:07pm


    Is this poem so hard to comment to?

    Since it is apparently, I'll comment.

    It's dark, and depressing, with various metaphors. It has some Poe like elements, and it also has it's Crane moments. It deals with feeling of betrayal, being lost within oneself and not being able to trust those who are the closest to you. It was also written in the middle of the night, and I fell asleep on it. It doesn't really have any particular person that it's written to.

    Was that so hard?


    clarinet-babe101
    Community Member





    Sun May 28, 2006 @ 06:23am


    i wasn't here ... don't be mad....i remember this one... have i seen it before... perhaps in doc's class ... ??...perhaps not... it does seem familiar though... super lots of ninja heart


    InnocentDreamer
    Community Member





    Sun May 28, 2006 @ 03:57pm


    Nah, this is a new one. And I'm not so much mad at you as I am with Stephen. He read it, told me he read it and is like..."i don't have anything to say..." and it just makes me mad cause even when I have nothing to say I atleast put something...

    super ninja heart 's for you.


    kittytucker18
    Community Member





    Sun May 28, 2006 @ 08:29pm


    awww ... raw emotion .... and of all times to read this .... thank you .... that was just what i needed ... mrgreen


    InnocentDreamer
    Community Member





    Sun May 28, 2006 @ 09:06pm


    What's that for?


    Warlonn
    Community Member





    Sun May 28, 2006 @ 11:00pm


    Look.. when I can't determine how I feel about a work, I'm hesitant to put down something, fearful of what I might say.

    Stephen
    It's very good.


    InnocentDreamer
    Community Member





    Sun May 28, 2006 @ 11:03pm


    *sigh* Thanks... It isn't as satisfying as if it would've been if I hadn't had to drag it outta you..


    User Comments: [7]
     
     
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