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my life is strange....so strange that i sometimes look back on it and wonder "WHOA! DID THAT REALLY HAPPEN!?" then i usually pass out for a hour. 4laugh jk.


Sonoko_Am
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Story!!! COME RATE MY STORIES!
4laugh my friends and family tell me i'm a good writer soooooooooooooooo I'll be writing a story on here soon, soo tell me what you think of it so i can improve it. and hopefully make a career out of it!!!! heart blaugh ...! BUt don't be a dramallama and diss me about it please! emo rate it one a 1-10 basis and tell why K? blaugh THANKS!




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IDASHIKO the wanderer.... stare

Idashiko sat down at the bar, her dark hood pulled over her face, her red hair spilling out from beneath it in curls. She could tell everyone was staring at her, wondering what she was doing in a place like this. She looked like a hunter, a secret assassin the kind that sit in the shadows and watches everything around them and in a way, she was.... Idashiko looked at her eyes, her large wolf amber eyes that stared back at her from the murky depths of the drink the bartender had handed her.
"You planning on stayin long?" he asked. He was a chubby man, middle aged, a bit of a snob really. She calculated how long it would take him to die....how fast she could cut him into peices.... "Hello?" he asked. Idashiko smiled and looked up into his very face. He pulled back in surprise and dropped the glass which he was cleaning with a dirty cloth. There it was....the look of horror and fear that she got whenever anyone saw her face, the dark skin, the smile so sweet....the wolf eyes.
"I....I'' he stuttered. Idashiko drank the ale in her cup down in one chug and smiled dangerously.
"No...." she hissed she could feel all the eyes in the pub staring at her, searching her, digging into her as if trying to read her mind. "i'll be going. Here's your tip....." she finished throwing a golden coin at him. It landed in his shirt pocket perfectly.
"Who...what are y-you?" he whispered, his voice trembling.
"You don't want to know...." she whispered so softly that she knew no one had heard her. Swiftly, she pulled open the pub door with her claw like hands and disappeared out into the snow....

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Fallen Angel.....

Kioshi sat in the tree watching over her innocent, Leith. He didn't even know she was watching him....he probably would send her away if he did, a result of the disagreement (as she called it) from the night before. Kioshi watched him with gentle blues eyes that sparkles beneath her black hair as he threw the basket ball at the garage door, let it hit the ground, picked it up displeased and repeated. Since she had only been with him a total of three days, that was what she realized he did when he was mad. He was very hard to understand. Suddenly, he threw the ball at the door and it hit him smack in the face. Leith growled and kicked the ball halfway down the street, hitting a small cat. Kioshi felt the blow of the ball in her back as if he had kicked it at her....yes, he was very angry with her.
"Kioshi...." he called. Kioshi shuddered at the tone of his suspicous voice. slowly, he turned and stared directly at her. "Kioshi, what the HECK are you doing up there!?" he scowled. Kioshi flew out of the tree and followed him to the back of the house where he had built a small treehouse for himself. it was uncomfortable but seeing as how he was the only one who could see her and it was awkward to be talking to a invisible angel, it had to do. She followed him in, her black wings sweeping over the grass.
"Kioshi..." Leith whispered once they were inside.
"I'm sorry, i didn't mean to. i apologize for everything. for give me?!" she asked quickly before he could finish. Leith blinked and then frowned. Quickly, he pulled her close, something she didn't expect.
"Kioshi, i love you, there is nothing you can do to make me angry." he sighed. Then he kissed her. Kioshi savered the kiss but knew that it would bring trouble up ahead....





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bloodseeker_keira
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comment Commented on: Thu Aug 10, 2006 @ 03:11am
10! definatly! i love it. the suspense, the description, the misteriousness of it. its great! keep writing it 4laugh


comment Commented on: Sun Aug 27, 2006 @ 07:16pm
*sniff sniff* my little georgie is growing up so fast....it was soo good. i definitly rate it a 10/10. heart 4laugh



Angels Passion
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9.13.PM
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comment Commented on: Mon Aug 28, 2006 @ 01:34am
its great! that kind of writing is perfect for my graphic novel!!! 10/10!!


comment Commented on: Fri Sep 15, 2006 @ 02:50am
Awesome stories!



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The Chicken Slayer
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comment Commented on: Fri Sep 15, 2006 @ 11:52pm
Very good! Could you read and comment on my journal?

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