APOLGISE IN ADVANDCE FOR ANY MIS TYPE....ITS 12:30 AM IN THE MORNING LOL..... well looks like i went on a writing spree today b/c i wrote 4 new poems so here they are to take a look at plz make a comment on them after you read...id really appreciate it..
this first one is something a friend wrote and the next one is my responce to it...
From Heat to Cold
As ech day passes Your heart is growing colder From lack of love or caring it's flame, now embers, beginning to smolder.
Who are you now Gone the one i called friend Is he dead, sleeping Or is this simply the end?
I won't let it be this way Even in this time of strife For I will help him return Even if it costs my life.
Part of you wants to be this way Tihs I know. But there's a hidden trap; It may pull you in its under tow.
IF this happens, you are doomed For having compassion does matter. Without it, you will die Because your body will crumble and mind will shatter.
If you try, you will not fail Looka tme I have done so. I'll be your life line, hold on to me Fighting with my flames, I'll never let you go.
--Iyasu Destiny
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Cold in Stone
A true friend who cared. A cold heart that didn't. Almost gone into the dark. A fire that was almost out. My eyes went blank. My mind just gone. Who am I now? What have I done? I betrayed my truest friend. Has she lost hope? Or is it I that has lost?
An over whelming confustion. A state of uncertainty. A deteralizing emotion. A silent plea of help. A world in pieces. Drove into the madness. But not letting go. Mentaly dead written in stone. The voices scrambled. Could it be? Is this really the end?
---Seto_crimson
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Calling Hearts
My heart is tangled. unsre of who it loves a past lover who revealed an unkown secret. a tell of jealusy but a deceit to protect her love. she told another who felt the same a lie to get her away only to fall to pieces. kept to only her. opened now by the same lovers passion to love her still. thoughts stir in her mind as in mine. could it truely be that her and i ahve a set destiny. no matter how far apart; we are meant to be together. it must be the truest love.
--seto_crimson
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A Million I Love Yous
Though there amay be million of ways to tall somone how much you love them they all mean the same thing. They say how a flower can bloom but yet it's beauty pails to you. They tell you how the moon and the stars may light the sky but the look in your eyes lights up their life. They use and angels voice and compare it to your own.
They mention the past as if you were always there. Their heartss pour emotions to you that only you could hear. Maybe mention a flame and say how their love is just the same. Some use refrence to the ocean and all its wonders. They take all the beauties the world and beyond can produce to all tell you what it is that makes them love you.
All I want to say is I love you.
---seto_crimson
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Thoughts and Feelings
My thoughts have remained on you all the nights through. I can close my eyes to see your face and hear your voice. Every time I see you I can't help but to long for your kissses' to hold you in my arms for all the nights to come. To hold your hand in mine, to see you smile is all I ever wanted to do. To make you happy is to see the world go round. IT makes my life complete when I hear you say you love me. There can be no greater feelign than the one you give to me. This is all I could ever dream it would be. you and I don't have to wish upon the stars to keep our love in tact. Let these words I say and things I do prove jsut how much I'm in love with you.
--seto_crimson
well i hope you enjoyed these poems and expect much more to come soon.
Seto_Crimson · Sat Jan 15, 2005 @ 05:31am · 4 Comments |