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My Latest Poem
As usual, for an explanation, message me.
Note: This is NOT a parody or anything of those idiotic myspace posts, this is something i've wanted to try and write.

"Our Love Didn't Stand A Chance"
I saw you
From the window on the third floor
I wanted nothing more then to speak to you
At least once
Your unmatched beauty
Is what lights my dark and dreary world
Passing days turned into passing weeks
You always remained on my mind
Until that one faithful day
I ran into you
Quite literally
I held out a hand to help you up
Our eyes met
You smiled, I smiled back
"My name is -" I said (Use your imagination, make it up yourself)
"My name is -" You said
We became inseparable
And I avoided that one faithful question
Then, HE started to show up more and more
Causing a severe change in my disposition
I became angry and distant
Then, I asked it, and let everything out
You accepted me
For all that I am
You became my one true love
And I became yours
Passing weeks turned into months
And it was all perfect
I loved you and help you dearly
You taught me how to love and be friendly
You saved me from the abyss
From this Hell I call a home and a life
Then, our perfect world began to crumble
We became distant
More and more each day
As your feelings faded
Mine grew
Then it happened
I don't know how it started
But it did
Our first, last, and only fight
We spoke the harshest words
Said things we didn't mean
You stormed out
And drove out of my life
Forever
I went to sleep
Then I received the call
I rushed to the scene
The twisted metal of your car littered the area
The glass crunched under my feel as I raced to you
I held my loves cold, limp, and bloody body in my arms.
And I wept
I screamed out my apologies to your spirit floating to Heaven
Hoping you could still feel my tears falling onto your skin
Hoping it would bring you back
But it didn't happen
I regret everything
And blamed myself
Upon returning home
To find I was all alone
I walked to the closet
Found the gun
I said one last prayer
I begged to be forgiven and I begged to see you again
Then I pulled the trigger
All the light faded
I heard one last noise
My ringing cell phone
The last thing I saw
Was you name on the screen...calling me.






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Klaatu24
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 01:58pm
This poem is sad i no ur trying to let ur emotion out i write as well but plz dont write sad stuff


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