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~The Story of my Life~
Well, this is my journal. ^_^ I shall be telling stuff and things and other things cuz stuff and things are what make up my life. :) Enjoy! :sweat:
Of Light
Of light,
Of lingering light,
Long lost to all,
Whip words by wind and wail.

Tread teardrop trails,
Through tangled tree limbs,
Bear forward with arms alike,
Know nothing of boundaries.

Ne'er stopping nor speaking,
Nor seeing signs,
Of darkened path pervail,
Still onward and relentless.

Look not back,
Not forward mind,
Your eyes have all but sight,
To see lies what lay ahead for those without a light.

Narrow gnarled northern path,
Upon which tread you all,
Onward forward never back,
Follow only the whipping wind's call.






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[anonymous]
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 11:37pm
I like it. I know I have told you before that I have trouble understanding you poems but for once, I think I actually get this one.....maybe. But I'm not going to tell you what I think it means because I'm too embaressed to be wrong. You alliteration is a little odd but I suppose it fits in nicely. Good job smile


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 11:59pm
This is a very, very nicely done poem Neal.

To me, it personally signifies a lost soul trying to look forward through their tear ridden eyes and blood beaten path.



Mand3r
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