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Feudal LYOKO
This is my story. I would like for my friends to tell me what they think before I post this on Fanfiction.net
Chapter 2 - INU- I mean, ULRICH
....Actually, I'm thinking about abandoning this story. It's been so long since I've really thought about it, and I didn't really have anything but a basic storyline, anyways. This journal entry is more to get a bunny for the Easter event.




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Chapter 1- Code LYO…I mean, Code FEDUAL!
Here it is. The first chapter. I will most likely change things, like details and stuff, from time to time. This is basicly my rough draft. Don't be gentle! I can take critcism. Constructive critisim is appreciated. Also, if you don't have any idea about either of the shows that this story is based on, which are Inuyasha and Code LYOKO, send me a message and I'll write a short summary. I'll tell you enough about the show so that you know what's going on.

Chapter 1- Code LYO…I mean, Code FEDUAL!

"Hey guys!" yelled Kagome, effectively startling the small group standing by the drink machines. Shippou was wearing his blue jean pants with his light blue shirt covered in white leaves and his favorite orange vest. He was the odd one, and was leaning against one of the machines talking to Inuyasha. Inuyasha was wearing his all red outfit, a red T-shirt and red pants, as usual. He stood out with his long silver hair and amber eyes. He was getting a cappuccino from the coffee machine and talking to Shippou. Miroku was wearing his black jeans with a dark violet shirt that complemented his violet eyes and short, black hair. He’s the brains of the group, was sitting on the bench with his laptop. Kagome smiled, shaking her head at him. She couldn't remember a time when he didn't have his precious laptop.

“Hey Kagome” came three voices. Kagome was wearing a pair of olive green pants with a white T-shirt. Around the collar of the shirt was olive green as well. Her long raven black hair swayed as she ran up to her group of friends. “What‘s up?” asked Kagome. “The sky.” “SHIPPOU!!!” yelled the others. “He he” was Shippou’s reply. “So, anything new?” Kagome asked. “Nothing much.” said Inuyasha. “Anything new on FEUDAL, Miroku?” Kagome asked Miroku. Miroku replied “No. NARAKU seems to be quiet. I wonder what he‘s planning?” Miroku said. “Whatever it is, it can‘t be good news for us.” said Inuyasha. “That‘s for sure.” agreed Shippou. “Come on, guys. We better get to class before we’re late.” said Kagome. “Yeah, we wouldn’t want to miss Ms. Kaede’s class, now would we Inuyasha?” Shippou said as he put his arm around Inuyasha’s neck with a huge grin on his face. “You mean the one we‘ve been to three times already?” Inuyasha said. Shippou answered “Yep!” “Shippou, I still don‘t get how you can go through a class at least twice and still fail it.” said Miroku as they were walking to class. “That, my friend, takes a lot of work! As if it wasn‘t boring enough the first time, we have to go through it again!” came Shippou’s reply.


~§~Lunch time, cafeteria~§~


“OOOOHHHHHHHH INUYASHA!!!!” someone yelled across the cafeteria. “Oh great, it’s Kiki!” groaned Inuyasha. “So Inuyasha, are you ready to confess your undying love for me?” asked Kiki. “Give it up, Kiki. I’m not secretly in love with you, I never was, and I’m never going to be!” exclaimed Inuyasha. Shippou added “So why don’t you just buzz off!” “Humph!” Kiki said and stomped off. “Wait for us, Kiki!” cried Ginta and Hakku, her faithful followers and secret admirers. “Man, is Kiki annoying or what!” said Shippou. Inuyasha said “She sure is.” Miroku comes rushing in the cafeteria and runs to Shippou, Inuyasha, and Kagome. Kagome asks “What’s the matter, Miroku?” “NARAKU is on the move. He’s activated a tower, and Sango’s in danger!” he replied. “Then what are we waiting around for?” Inuyasha asked as he was getting up. “Come on guys! Let‘s head to the factory!” exclaimed Kagome. “YEAH!” cried the others as they headed towards the secret passage in the woods.


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