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Writing's of the Mind Nothing too epic... I plan to just put down poems and such that come to me, or that I have written in the past, maybe even a few stories, or bits of them, as well as whatever happens to be stuck in my head...


CaelaRonan
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Poems
Hmm... Can't remember exactly when I wrote this, but it was for my Creative Writing class, so it had to be some time after January... Just let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is welcome!

Please don't tell me not to cry
Please don't say there was a reason why
You don't know what I am feeling
Or how much I hurt
The wet spots are from tears on the collar of this shirt
You think I should go on with life
Forget about it and be strong
But deep down I am sad, and I don't want to go along
I don't expect you to understand why
For no apparent reason I break down and start to cry
My life has changed forever, you see
And that is why I am not acting like the same ole me
So please don't try to act like nothing happened
Because it changed my life forever
I will never be the same again
Not today, not tomorrow, not ever
The best thing you can do for me is just be there
Just like always, my friend
My broken heart is hurting bad
And it will never mend.






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