This first one os really old, I wrote it back in the seventh grade, but the last four are fairly new, I wrote them back in April or so. Just tell me what you think. Constructive crticism is welcome.
He and She
He's been gone for many days,
She is very sad.
He has gone many ways,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many weeks,
She is very sad.
It's something new that He seeks,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many months,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many months,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many years,
She is very sad.
He has shed many tears,
They are very sad.
He's been gone for many ages,
She is very sad.
He has passed many stages,
She is very sad.
Haiku:
Harvest moon rises-
Shining eerie and pale-
The soft light of night.
Senryu:
She sits alone,
Lost in a different world,
Book open in hand.
Tanka:
Clouds Sneak in, wind blows,
The sun swiftly disappears,
Gentle rain falling,
Thunder and lightning move in,
The wind blows it out again.
Cinquain:
Silence,
Calmly dreaming,
A smile on her face,
Comfortable in her soft bed,
Awakes.
He and She
He's been gone for many days,
She is very sad.
He has gone many ways,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many weeks,
She is very sad.
It's something new that He seeks,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many months,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many months,
She is very sad.
He's been gone for many years,
She is very sad.
He has shed many tears,
They are very sad.
He's been gone for many ages,
She is very sad.
He has passed many stages,
She is very sad.
Haiku:
Harvest moon rises-
Shining eerie and pale-
The soft light of night.
Senryu:
She sits alone,
Lost in a different world,
Book open in hand.
Tanka:
Clouds Sneak in, wind blows,
The sun swiftly disappears,
Gentle rain falling,
Thunder and lightning move in,
The wind blows it out again.
Cinquain:
Silence,
Calmly dreaming,
A smile on her face,
Comfortable in her soft bed,
Awakes.
