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De4D Report | 11/23/2009 3:06 am

Hey razz

TvivT Report | 09/06/2009 10:04 pm

Practice that grammar

N l N 4 Report | 01/15/2009 9:13 pm

Keep in mind that you are talking to me, probably the most apathetic human being ever.





No.



But practice makes perfect, so keep writing.

N l N 4 Report | 01/15/2009 8:34 pm

Good. But seriously, that first part was...



You weren't forcing emotion. It was like you were cookie-cutting; everything was exact and to the point, almost like an educational essay.

N l N 4 Report | 01/15/2009 8:19 pm

*Rolls eyes*



Whatever.



Your story needs more emotion. The third part was slightly better, but it started out a little monotonous.

N l N 4 Report | 01/15/2009 8:05 pm

I cannot believe that you are even having that inane conversation.



We're humans. We suck. Gee, how long did it take for you to figure that out?

Namuie Report | 01/12/2009 6:14 pm

How could you?!

D:

Friar Thomas Report | 12/20/2008 5:28 pm

Yeah I know

Friar Thomas Report | 12/20/2008 1:20 pm

I know right

Friar Thomas Report | 12/20/2008 10:55 am

That'd be because I was 17 when we started the Leone family