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PostPosted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 9:05 pm


The Legend of Anturon (working title)
copyright Cathryn Joy 2009

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Chapter one

“The Arcane Lore of the Middle and Northern Reaches”

In the far northern reaches of our world lies the formidable Murmuring Mountain, about which much has been said in myth and song. The wind that blows through the mountain’s many caves and passages moans and howls, like the tormented souls thought to be trapped within the rock itself. And from the bowels of this great jutting rock, from an underground spring, flow forth the crystalline waters of the Busy River; so named for two reasons. The first, and by far oldest, being that the river’s swift and strong current gives one the impression that the crisp, babbling water is in a great hurry to rush across the planes towards the ocean. The second being that rich fishing towns and trading ports have long clustered about the Busy River’s banks.

Our story, however, does not concern these centres of trade, but a quite farming settlement called Anturon, sprawled across the land in the shadow of Murmuring Mountain. The origins of Anturon are as vague, disputed and romanticised as its demise. All that is known, or perhaps assumed, is that settlers from further south established it when their farms became overworked. It was a necessary move, not one of choice, but the town, and the crops, flourished on the rich highland soils. Far more has been recorded about Anturon’s end, in myth and song – but fact has become almost indistinguishable from the fictions such tales acquire with age. The most widely agreed upon history runs thus . . .

* * *

As the people of Anturon prepared for their first harvest, a great sense of excitement filled the air. The crops had done spectacularly well – almost unheard of for a first season. Wine flowed freely, followed shortly by song which rang out across the fields, carried afar by the warm evening breeze.

Looking toward Murmuring Mountain, one villager fancied he saw some movement about the small stone house perched upon a ridge on the mountainside.

“Impossible,” he thought, “no one lives there. It’s deserted.” The villagers had always viewed this house with suspicion. Though they had never seen any sign of life within, they dared not approach, for there was little sign of life outside its walls either. All vegetation within a stone’s throw of this mysterious dwelling had long since withered and died. Most animals gave the area a wide berth, save for a few carrion birds and the occasional wolf that prowled through the area on his descent of the peak.

“It must have been a wolf, or a trick of the failing light.” No sooner had these thoughts crossed the young man’s mind than the heavy door of the strange house was pushed open, spilling flickering light from within which framed a tall and wiry figure standing upon the doorstep. The young man turned aside to draw the being’s sudden appearance to another’s attention, but the whole village was made aware of it before the young man could say a single word.

An unearthly scream pierced the very air. As the chilling sound echoed about the mountain it seemed a great blade had rent a gaping hole in the fabric of the world, through which all sound, light, colour and all the evening’s cheer were being sucked away. The door of the small house had been shut, trapping the light inside so that no form was visible on the mountain side.

Terrified villagers screamed as the bonfire behind them erupted in fierce blue flame. Turning their backs on Murmuring Mountain, they huddled together in fear as a most bizarre figure emerged from the fire, blue flames licking at her heels.

The cool green grass hissed and burned where her feet fell, as soft blue flames continued to dance upon her feet. Her eyes were wide, her irises colourless. She blinked furiously as her gazed darted from the cowering villagers to their crop-filled fields and back again. Her pearl-white skin gleamed in the light of the blue fire. She took another scorching step forwards and stretched out her stick-like arms, palms upturned, in a gesture of questioning. Her long, slender fingers, also wreathed in blue flame, gestured towards the fields and houses. Finally, she spoke.

“What is this?” she croaked. Her voice was harsh and rasping, as if it had been a very long time since she had spoken, and had forgotten just how it was done. When none were brave enough to answer, she spoke again.

“What is this?” she repeated, much louder this time, a flash of anger in her disused voice. Her unnerving white-eyed gaze fell upon the trembling Smithy.

“Th . . . This . . . is is is An . . . Anturon . . . err . . .” she took another scorching step towards the quivering man. “. . . my . . . err . . . my . . . lady?” he added sheepishly.

The creature promptly turned her back upon the crowd and once again the bone-shattering scream echoed through the night. She spun back round to face them again.

“I came here for QUIET! I came here to be alone! I have lived here in solitude since the age of the first moon, and now you take me refuge away from me!” Here she screamed again, apathetic to the pain it inflicted upon the villagers’ ears.

“If you hope to remain here in the shadow of this Mountain I expect to be recompensed for your intrusion. You will make an offering from your harvest every year that you encroach upon my existence or you shall pay dearly for it.”

With a final scream she leapt into the bonfire and was engulfed in blue flames. And then she was gone. All that remained where she had stood where a few smouldering logs and glowing embers, which illuminated the pale, horrified faces of the people of Anturon.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 5:58 am


Chapter Two 3 times longer than chapter one - yay!

* I just realised before (major oversight) that I completely forgot to include the Sorceress's name in chapter 1. She will not simply be "the sorceress" throughout the whole thing. Her name is Arna Arishka. I will work this into my redraft of chapter one and hopefully upload it soon.

* Also, I'm not quite all there at the moment *is sick* so, if there's any gibberish or bits that don't make sense, please let me know, or (quite likely) any spots where the style/narrative voice slips out of character.

* Lastly, I know absolutely nothing about farming or agriculture (and haven't had time for research), so if there are any gaping voids or obvious mistakes in this regard, please point them out.


Chapter Two

Year after year, the people of Anturon lived in peace and prosperity, with each harvest as bountiful, if not more so, than the last. They passed the warmer months in their work, tending their fields and their livestock, and teaching and nurturing their children. The colder months brought frosts, and even the odd sprinkling of snow, and always the villagers feared their next crop would fall short of the norm, for surely the mountain soils, rich though they were, could not continue such high yields forever. But, for the time being, it appeared that their fortune would continue.

Each year, as the harvest approached, the villagers worried that their offerings would not satiate the sorceress, Arna Arishka. Her presence was sensed, not seen, and still those who had witnessed her first appearance could hear her rasping voice at the backs of their minds. The winds that howled through the caves of Murmuring Mountain seemed to echo her warning.

You will make an offering from your harvest every year that you encroach upon my existence or you shall pay dearly for it.

The children of Anturon seemed to be born with an innate fear, both of the seemingly deserted house upon the mountain, and for the sorceress they never saw. The villagers would not risk Arna even a glimpse of their children, lest she prefer to eat them than the foods they offered her, like the witches of children’s tales.

Unlike in other farming towns, and indeed in the towns the people of Anturon had once called home, Anturon’s harvest was always a subdued affair. Music and mirth had first drawn them to Arna’s attention, and they could not risk evoking her anger.

The children were not permitted to take part until they came of age in their fourteenth year. Those too young were given fresh bread and newly-pressed honey, and tucked into bed before the sun left the sky.

In the gathering darkness, a bonfire would be lit, around which all the villagers gathered. Brother Almar, their spiritual leader, would give thanks and praise to Lanaya, Mother of Fertility. A small lamb or goat would be sacrificed in Her name, its blood returned to the earth, Lanaya’s womb, from which all life sprang.

The ceremony would draw to a close as the last radiant glow of the setting sun sank below the horizon, and the stars burst forth from the indigo sky above them. The gathered crops would be carried in large woven baskets across the fields, as close as the villagers dared get to the foot of Murmuring Mountain. Livestock would be tethered close by, and fowls contained in lidded baskets clucked sleepily. Returning to the safety of their village, the people of Anturon would see no more of Arna than her wiry silhouette as she peered out her door, ensuring her demands were met and no surprises awaited her.

At first light the next morning, the children of Anturon leapt from their beds and raced to the edge of the settlement. Their feet blackened by the charcoal that was all that remained of the night’s bonfire, they craned their necks for a glimpse of Arna. But there was never any sign of her, nor of the offering she had been left. The little house upon the mountain would show no signs of life, until light once again spilled from the open door as she watched the villagers, like a hawk watching its prey.

* * *

By the fateful year of this tale, Anturon was still only a young town. The first children born in the village were recently come of age. Their excitement grew as their first harvest, and their first glimpse of Arna, approached.

This had been a prosperous season. The wheat stood tall and proud in its field, shining in the sun light. In the orchards, tree branches bowed and creaked under the weight of the fruit they bore. So buoyed by this sight were the people of Anturon that they did not immediately notice the dark clouds gathering upon the horizon, and they paid no heed to the sudden chill on the wind.

As the day wore on, grey clouds rolled across the sky, obscuring the sun. The villagers gazed up at the sky appraisingly.

“There’s good rain in those clouds”, remarked Rycroft knowledgably, with a toothless grin. “Good for the harvest.”

Several men working nearby grunted in agreement, each of them pausing in their work to gaze at the approaching storm. Many other people in the village did the same. A sudden gust of cool air, biting at their hot skin, seemed to jerk them out of their reverie and they returned to their tasks.

They were not long at their work, however, before the light began to fail. No sooner had they ceased their work and gathered up their tools, than fat, heavy drops of rain fell like chips of iron from the sky.

Small children splashed joyfully in quickly forming puddles, and the villagers breathed in the sweet smell of the rain as it fell upon the sun-warmed wheat fields. When the rain redoubled its intensity, the villagers sought the shelter of their homes.

But this was no ordinary storm. Every now and then, when the weather conditions are right, the Northern Reaches are lashed by severe storms, known by some as the Northern Furies.

That night was a sleepless one for the people of Anturon. Roaring thunder shook the very walls of their houses, terrifying the children, and dazzling flashes of lightning sliced through the night sky, illuminating the iron grey clouds.

Children cried and curled themselves up in the protective embrace of loved ones. The cattle lowed in fear and the bells about the necks clanged noisily as the frightened animals agitated the soft ground with their hooves. With each clap of thunder the fowls all squawked and flapped about.

But little of this clamouring chorus reached the villagers’ ears over the sound of the storm. Thousands upon thousands of berry-sized hail stones pounded upon the roofs and the sodden ground with a dull “thunk”, “thunk”, “thunk”. The driving rain beat a relentless rhythm on their roofs and soon began to find small gaps in the thatching. As water dripped into their homes, the people of Anturon resigned themselves to a sleepless night.

Unable to sleep, Myfanwy took up her sewing in the guttering light of an oil lamp which cast dancing shadows upon the walls as she worked. A sudden clap of thunder made her jump, and she swore under her breath as she pricked her finger upon the needle. She flung her work aside in frustration. As still more thunder rang out through the night, her son, Darton, awoke from a fitful sleep with a start and began to cry again.

Darton leapt from his bed and raced towards his mother.

“Mummy! I’m . . .I’m scareded!” Burying his tear-stained cherubic face against her chest, he entwined his fat little fingers in her hair as she held him close.

“Hush, now. It’s alright. It’s just a storm” Myfanwy hoped her son could not sense the tremor in her voice that betrayed her own nerves. How she wished her husband was still alive; she would have felt safer then.

“Make the big noises stop, Mummy!” wailed Darton tearfully as the pounding rain and clamouring thunder continued.

“They’ll stop soon, sweetheart. They’ll stop soon.” She stroked his downy blonde hair as she cooed gently in his ear. “You’ll be a big brave boy for Mummy, now, won’t you?”

She swayed gently from side to side with her child in her arms. Darton was soon asleep again, and Myfanwy followed him shortly, falling asleep on the floor.

As dawn approached, the thunder and lightning ceased, and the rain eased to a light shower. Normally early risers, the exhausted villagers slept well into the morning. The sun seemed to sit higher in the sky than usual, as if it were curious to know what happened and wanted to get a good look.

Stretching, yawning, and blinking in the bright morning light, the people of Anturon emerged from their houses. Never had they expected, or planned for, the sight that met their eyes . . .

* * *

A tangible silence spread throughout the crowd as the extent of the storm’s damage was realised.

Little remained of the golden crop of wheat; fine chaff still floated lazily upon the warm breeze, like golden flakes of snow. That which remained was bent and battered, but salvageable. The corn had fared little better than the wheat, saved only by its hairy husks. Leaves and braches were strewn across the fields.

As the milk maids hurried to soothe the restless cows, the rest of the villagers spread out to better survey the damage.

In the orchards, the fruit trees’ branches no longer bowed because of the weight of their wares, but because they were snapped and windswept. Bruised, battered and crushed fruit lay upon the muddy ground, surrounding by the slowly melting hail stones that had destroyed them. Berry brambles, now no more than prickly sticks, seemed almost to bleed from mortal wounds as scarlet juice dripped from their thorns.

And so it was with almost all their crops. About the only thing that remained reasonably unharmed were the vegetables growing below the rich warm soil. But they could not survive an entire year on carrots and onions, could they?

As the enormity of the situation became apparent, the people of Anturon despaired at their plight. They had grown so accustomed to bountiful harvests that each year they had stored and preserved less and less food.

The harvest was a week away. The grain farmers, feeling that the battered broken wheat was unlikely to grow or recover enormously in the short period before harvest, decided to collect it that day, lest another storm roll in over night and destroy what was left. The same was decided of the other remaining produce, and so the day was passed in fervent work as usual, but with far graver spirits.

The least damage produced was collected and stored in Anturon’s main hall, while the more battered was turned into jams, pickles and preserves. That which was beyond salvage was fed to the livestock.

As the day drew to a close, the villagers gathered about a bon fire, onto which were thrown the broken limbs of ruined trees, amongst other debris from the storm.

Darton tugged at the hem of his mother’s dress.

“Mummy! I’m scareded”. Myfwanwy scooped the child up into her arms. Balancing his weight upon her hip, she caressed his flushed cheek.

“It’s alright now, poppet. The storm is gone.” He fidgeted in her arms, straining to look over his shoulder.

“Noooo, not the storm” he grizzled, “not scareded of the storm.”

“Oh? But then what has frightened you, sweetheart?”

“No food”, he said simply. Myfanwy smiled gently at him and kissed his forehead.

“There will be enough food for you, dear.”

“Not for me!” he said, almost impatiently.

“Oh. Who for then? For me? Or your friends?” she shifted his weight higher up on her hip and continued. “There will be enough for us all. Not as much as we’re used to, but we will manage.” When Darton began fidgeting in her arms and tried to look over his shoulder again, Myfanwy became concerned.

“Darling, what is it? Just tell me. Has someone said something to frighten you?”

“The mean lady” he said, with a tremor in his voice.

“The mean lady? You mean Missus Applet-- . . . ”

“No! The mean lady! Who takes the food.”

Myfanwy still could not comprehend what her son was trying to tell her.

“The one on the mountain, who comes at night.” Comprehension dawned on Myfanwy as suddenly and sickeningly as if a lead weight had been dropped into her stomach.

“Arna.” The word was barely more than a breath.

“Will she eat me instead, Mummy?” Tears welled in Darton’s deep blue eyes, and his mother had to fight back tears of her own.

“No, no, no, no, I . . . I won’t let her, sweetheart. I won’t let her harm you.”

Noticing Myfanwy’s distress, Esme, the “mother hen” of Anturon, enquired:

“Alright, love? Little man getting a bit grizzly?”

“Arna” she said simply. It was all she could think to say. “What do we do about Arna?”

The chatter quickly died away as the thought suddenly struck the villagers. Having spent the day so hard at work, after so little sleep, it had not occurred to them that Arna would be less than pleased with the measly harvest.

“Well,” ventured Esme, a lot more tentatively than before, “not much we can do just now. Best we get some sleep, and we’ll all talk it over in the morning.” The small group half expected her to continue, but when she said nothing more and, instead, fiddled with a small hole in her sleave and avoided everyone’s eyes, they had to admit she was right. As much as they wanted to resolve this new hurdle, it would have to wait. With distracted murmurs of “good night” they returned to their houses.

* * *

Early next morning, all the people of Anturon gathered to consider the problem of Arna.

Brother Almar, as always, believed the best of everyone, and insisted Arna would listen to reason.

“Surely,” he said, “she will see the devastation left by the storm. She may already have seen it. She cannot expect us to make the same offering of years past.” He looked imploringly at the crowd before him, arms outstretched as if to embrace and comfort them all.

“Brother Almar, I mean you no disrespect. You are a man of sound mind and kind heart.” Here the new speaker, Jasper the Smithy, bowed deeply, as if in supplication, which Brother Almar returned with a modest smile.
“However,” he continued a little more forcefully, wiping the smile from the priest’s face, “you cannot possibly believe that dross!” Several of the crowd gasped.

“I I I . . . I w . . . would . . . like to believe it, yes. In fact -- . . .”

“Oh, we’d all like to believe it, Brother, but how can we? How can we believe that this, this . . . thing! this creature will listen to reason? Do you remember what she said that night, Brother? Do you remember how she said we shall ‘pay dearly’ if we do not appease her?”

The stunned priest was lost for words. He merely opened and closed his mouth, voicing no thoughts, like a landed fish gasping for air.

Everyone turned as a middle aged woman stood up to speak. Fear was written all over her care-worn face. “I say we run. Leave. Before she can do us harm.” The desperation in her voice was evident. “Let us not keep our children in harm’s way. The harvest is six days from now. If we gather provisions and our belongings today, we can leave tomorrow and reach the safety of Erumar in three or four days’ walk. We’ll be safe there. We can start again.”

A murmur of agreement ran through the crowd, gathering strength.

“No.”

A sudden silence fell upon the crowd.

A tall, broad shouldered young man stood up, and all eyes turned to him.

“We cannot run. Anturon’s founders left their homes because they had to. They had to find more prosperous soils. We have a choice. We can run away and hide – but what happens if she finds us? Follows us? Or, we can fight for what we have worked for.”
“I say we make our offering to Arna as usual, from the best of the harvest and -- . . .”

“We’ll do no such thing!” cried the middle aged woman. “You’d give all the best to her” here she spat upon the ground, “and leave our people to starve? To live on scraps and jam?”

“I never said it would be easy! But the way I see it our options are ‘hard’ or ‘dead’, and personally I’d rather live on scraps and jam than not live at all.” Several people cheered at this and, buoyed by this show of increasing support, the young man pressed on.

“Maybe”, he said solemnly, “this had to happen. Maybe we had to learn not to be complacent, and to simply expect the good harvests to continue. Maybe we needed to learn that nothing lasts forever.”

At these sobering words, Jasper rejoined the debate.

“I agree with the lad. We must prepare our offering for Arna as usual.” Speaking to everyone, he said “Do we agree, more or less, upon this plan?”

Though a few remained unconvinced of the merits of this ‘plan’, for the most part the people of Anturon agreed. This decision was a defining moment in the town’s short history . . .

Arnoria


Arnoria

PostPosted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:35 am


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"The Legend of Anturon" (working title) copyright Cathryn Joy 2009

Chapter Three

Before the sun or any of the other villagers rose on the day they would otherwise have celebrated their harvest, Myfanwy gathered her sleeping son in her arms and wrapped him in blankets. She hurried through the early morning darkness to the bank of the Busy River, tears spilling over her cheeks.

She knew Arna would not be satisfied by the meagre offering. She could not leave – her absence would be noticed – but she could not risk what Arna might do to her child. Placing Darton in a small rowing boat, she tucked two letters into his blankets; one for whoever might find him, and one for the son she would never see grow up.

With trembling fingers she untied the moorings and watched as the current quickly carried her son down-stream. With great difficulty, she returned to her house before the approaching dawn woke the rest of the town.

* * *

When the sun rose above the wasted and empty fields of Anturon there was no one at work in the fields. All the work had been done a week previously, and with the crops so decimated it had only taken a fraction of the time it usually required. The mood was grey and anxious; the atmosphere was thick, as if it could be caught in cupped hands.

People kept glancing over their shoulders, half expecting to see Arna lurking about. Brother Almar seemed particularly nervous. He paced back and forth in the ruined orchard of fruit trees, whispering prayers and invocations under his breath. So distracted was he, that he was quite startled when a tousle-haired young boy leapt out from behind a tree.

“Why you --!” Catching himself before he said anything untoward, Brother Almar picked up the string of prayer beads he had dropped. Glancing about to see no one was looking, the priest cuffed the boy smartly across the back of his head, sending him scurrying off to rejoin his guffawing friends. Muttering something about “no respect for elders”, Almar resumed his pacing and prayers.

As the group of boys returned to the centre of the village, still laughing about their prank, they stopped and stared, as did many other people, at an older man sitting upon the step outside his house.

“S’not gunna work” he asserted to no one in particular. Finding his flagon empty he let it slip from his fingers. He seemed oblivious to the number of people now watching him, and simply sat there, hiccoughing, and said no more.

Sensing trouble, as she was so adept at doing, clucky old Esme bustled through the crowd.

“Don’t go scaring everyone now, Bowen,” she said reproachfully, wagging an admonishing finger at him as she would a troublesome child.

“You know s’not gunna work, E-E-Esme” he hiccoughed loudly. People were beginning to mutter anxiously amongst themselves.

As if to banish these whisperings by discrediting their instigator, Emse said loudly, “Bowen Carmine you always were an appalling drunk! Up you get and inside till you sober up!”

Despite being three times her size, Bowen seemed unwilling to defy Esme. As he lurched to his feet, however, he began again, louder than before.

“We’re done fer! She’ll ‘ave our noggin’s fer this!”

Esme caught Bowen by an elbow as he staggered closer to the group of boys. They recoiled at the stench of alcohol on his breath.

“Arna’s gunna get hungry ‘fore long. You lads bedder wotch your backs!”

As Esme steered the sodden man into his house, people returned to their own houses, glancing over their shoulders towards Arna’s house upon the mountain as they went.

Though there was no work to occupy the people of Anturon, the rest of the day seemed to fly. Before long the sun began to set, staining the evening sky crimson. Once the children were all tucked into bed, the rest of the villagers gathered in the growing darkness to deliver the harvest to Arna.

No animal was slain in sacrifice this year; they simply could not spare one. Instead, each of the villagers offered up a few drops of their own blood to be returned to the soil – penance for expecting Lanaya to provide them so much.

Giving thanks that sufficient food remained, and Lanaya had not left them to starve, Brother Almar blessed the food and livestock gathered for Arna.

As the strongest men lifted the baskets of food and headed towards the foot of the mountain, a pale flickering light spilled onto the mountainside as Arna emerged to survey the proceedings.

The youngest of the assembled crowd edged towards the mountain, straining their necks for their first glimpse of the sorceress. But they could see nothing more than an indistinct black shape framed by the doorway in which she stood. They were clearly disappointed that Arna’s presence was not more imposing or intimidating. And then the door shut, and the light was gone. Growing bored and restless, they began to joke and talk amongst themselves, but they fell silent at the worried looks upon their parents’ faces. The men who had delivered the food were running back towards them.

“Mum, what’s -- ?”

“Something’s not right.” She drew her son close to her, her eyes darting hither and thither, looking for danger, like a frightened animal.

“Verden, what’s wrong? Did you see her? Did you see anything?” Her voice rose higher with each question as she trembled with fear.

“I’m worried, Mia. All I know is she isn’t standing there watching us like she usually does, and I don’t like it. She knows. She must know.”

As if in response to this, the night sky suddenly burned with a brilliant light, as if lit from behind by a blinding white fire. Their legs frozen in fear, the villagers stood rooted to the spot, gazing about in terror. The wind was perfectly still, and all sound seemed dull and distant. As the silence pressed upon them under the illuminated sky, the spell was suddenly broken as an all too familiar scream resonated across the fields.

People ran for the cover of their homes as fast as their feet would allow. Terrified children raced out into the streets in search of their parents, as babies’ crying mingled with Arna’s continued screeching.

Before even half had reached their doors, blue flames once more erupted in the centre of the village atop the embers of the bonfire. From their midst emerged Arna, but not as they remembered her.

She had delved further into her magic since her first appearance in the village. No magic comes without a price, and her body had been further distorted by its effects. None could believe she had ever been human.

Her waist-length hair was composed of the same blue fire that clung to her hands and feet, and there seemed little more to her frame than skin and bone; not an ounce of fat or flesh did she appear to possess. Her eyes, now perfectly spherical, were completely white, so that she had the appearance of being blind – though the villagers knew this could not be. She turned her milky eyes towards the trembling people shielding themselves behind walls, barrels and wagons. She screamed again, several windows shattering nearby.

As if to steel herself, Arna drew a long, deep breath which seemed almost to suck the air out of the villagers’ lungs.

“I have not been duly recompensed,” she said simply, her voice harsher than it had once been. When none dared to respond, she shouted, “I have not been duly recompensed!”

Her blue-flame hair suddenly flared scarlet in her anger; its radiant light reflected eerily on her white eyes, tinting them red.

“Do you seek to defy me? . . . Or to mock me?” Terrified villagers shook their heads vehemently, but none uttered a word.

“Do. Not. Lie!”

Arna opened her mouth as if to speak again, but paused as movement caught her eye. One of the villagers who had reached her house before Arna’s appearance, was the middle aged woman from the meeting who had wanted to run to Eruma. Evidently she still held this desire. Clasping the hand of her pregnant daughter, the two women were running towards a small boat moored at the bank of the Busy River.

With a rush of scarlet flame Arna disappeared into thin air. A second later, the two women running for the boat were engulfed in a scarlet fireball. Their agonised screams were short lived. The flames were gone as suddenly as they had appeared, and all that remained was a pile of smouldering ash.

The people of Anturon gazed in horror and sheer disbelief at the spot where the two women had been. Inching towards the river bank, they all jumped and screamed as Arna reappeared behind them in another rush of flame.

As they turned to her, the flames that surrounded her shifted from scarlet to purple, before fading back to blue.

“All I ever wanted, was my solitude. You took that from me, so I took payment from you. Is that not fair?” The villagers were too scared to disagree, but felt they had been too wronged to admit they saw her point; they said nothing.

“All I ever wanted, was to be alone.” There was something in Arna’s voice, that suggested she didn’t truly believe what she said.

Did she really want to be alone? Was she lonely? These thoughts ran through the villagers minds and they battled with their beliefs. Surely they could not pity Arna after what she had done.

“You have until sunrise to pay me what is due.”

“No.”

So taken aback by this unexpected response was Arna that she seemed at a loss as to what to do. Before she could say a word, Jasper the Smithy stepped forwards. Arna looked him up and down with glassy white eyes. Jasper’s hands trembled, but his voice was steady and firm.

“We can’t spare anything. The storm destroyed our crops. If we give any more to you, we shall starve ourselves.”

“So you will give me nothing more?” asked Arna, a tinge of purple creeping into her aura of fire once more.

“Nothing” said Jasper with an air of finality.

“Then you are dead anyway!”

Arna raised her arms and turned her blank gaze to the sky as now red flames danced about her body. Chanting under her breath, she spread her arms wide as if to embrace the whole village. As she lowered her head the villagers could see her eyes were now as perfectly black as they had previously been white.

The wind picked up out of nowhere, but blew not from one direction. Rather it circled about the entire town, surrounding Anturon like an invisible wall.

As the wind grew stronger, everything began to tremble, from the trees to the houses, even the villagers themselves. And little by little, everything began to shift, as if it was suddenly less solid than before, as if the glue that had held it all together had dried out.

Like grain trickling through spread fingers, everything began to turn to sand. Everything – including the people of Anturon – seemed to fold in upon itself, to collapse, as it all turned into fine white sand. The village and everything it had contained was soon reduced to nothing more than shifting white dunes.

The winds stopped circling the village and instead rushed from all directions towards Arna, carrying the sand with it. The sand swirled into shifting mass, suspended between Arna’s outstretched hands. When the last grains had been drawn into her grasp she burst into a ball of scarlet fire once again.

When the flames dies down, Arna held in her hand a small glass orb, about the size of an apple, inside which was the tiniest little village. Anturon was trapped in time, like a fly caught in amber. Where the village had been, there was now nothing but open grassland.

Speaking to the minute villagers within the orb, that glimmered in the light of the once again blue fire, Arna said, almost apologetically;

“You made me do it.”

And with this she drew back her arm and threw the glass ball with all her preternatural strength. She watched it soar through the air, out of her range of sight. It landed, hundreds of leagues away, in the middle of the sea with a soft “gloop!”

Arna returned to her mountainside home. As she shut the door, the only light that remained was that of the moon and stars as they shone high above the vast and empty plains.
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