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Croakers
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 7:46 am


Primordial ooze, as you all should know, is supposedly the start of all life, that is why this story is named this. This story's about how kids all over the world, find strange brown packages in the strangest places, basically, where ever they are, there will be one just for each of the chosen ones. The kids who open them are going to have some fun, and pain, while the others, well...You'll see...

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:35 am


Several miles beneath the Mid-Atlantic oceans...

"Our next candidate, Henaioto. 15-years-old, 5'10", has two sibling who he would give his life for, claims he's fearless..."
"Make the shipment to him, and the next 42 on the list.."
"Why-"
"Because I said to!"
"Yes sir..."
"And the 43rd candidate is..."

~ ~ ~

Meanwhile, at a school is Western Washington, a young, Chinese/Vietnamese girl opened her locker after-school...

Linkai was a "Straight-A-Student," most of her peers glared at her in vain and envy, except one, Sikydo. Sikydo was about 5'8", scraggly jet black hair, shimmering blue eyes, and had some issues with paranoia and insaneness...Of course, they weren't medical issues, just self-afflicted issues...

Linkai, being shorter than her friend, like most 8th graders there are, was always at the recieving end of short jokes...It made her laugh, but a little tense. In her locker were two small, rectangular, brown packages, one marked Sikydo, who was peering over her, his chin on her head, the other package marked Linkai.
"One of these is yours..." She said as she smacked him in the face with his package.
"Why would something destined to reach me, be in your locker...?" He asked as he took the package in both hands.
"I don't even know why mines ‌in my locker!" Linkai snapped, before curiously inspecting the package...
"Open it.." Sikydo urged her.
"You!" She snapped back, clearly tweaked...
"Ok! I'll do it in the restroom so that no one will see it..." He replied cheerilly, before walking towards the boy's restroom.

Now this cell of torture had been known to cause tramatic ordeals with one whiff of the nose, but Sikydo knew where the fresh air spots are. He stood on the sink area, an overhang provided a perfect counter where he was free from the deadly aromas.

He slowly opened the package, setting the contents on the overhang, there was a note, a device like a watch, but a bit more high-tech with more buttons, and a bottle of green muck. The note read this:

Dear Sikydo Lon Kazne,

By opening this box, you released a bacteria that will fuse with your, and only your D.N.A. Place the device anywhere on your body where it can be easily accessed, it will tell you how much time you have before your transformation is complete. The liquid, if you wish to turn back to normal, you must drink before the transformation is complete, it will be a deadly toxin afterwards. By the time 24 hours pass, you will be sent to an area where more will be made clear.

Your in for one hell of a night,
Dr.Kazne
P.S. The device does much, much, more.

Croakers
Vice Captain


Croakers
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 12:02 am


The black-haired boy slowly emerged from the lavatory, his eyes buring prefusely. The device was wrapped around his right palm, the device on the top, the band in his plam, the package in hand, while the other rubbed his eyes...

"Well..." Linkai quizzed.
"Well what?!" The 14-year-old snapped back.
"What was in the package?!"
"Open it yourself!"
"Fine!"

Linkai sat down and opened it, after reading the note, she instantly drank the muck without hesitation...But then, she stood up, and barfed up blood in the nearest trashcan.

Three hours later, as Sikydo was rubbing his now yellow eyes while groaning on his bed in pain, the phone rang as if it were mad. He got up, his ears starting to hurt from the intense ringing. Pain shot up through his leg, he looked down to see his feet scaly like a lizards...

The boy gazed at the phone across the room, before opening his mouth for a long, thin, green tounge to grab the phone. "Y-yes...?" He stammered into the phone weakly...

"Sike? you don't sound so good, you didn't drink that muck yet, did you...?" Linkai's voice asked in a caring voice...
"N-no..."
"Well you should! I did and now I feel great!"
"N-no...I-I'm g-gonn-na s-see thi-this thr-thr-through..." He pushed out quietly...
"Idiot." She said instantly before hanging up.
Sikydo, on the other hand, crushed the phone in his hand, before collapsing onto the bed.

A few hours later, an alarm went off like a cry for help, sudden, and loud. Sikydo launched out of bed, and started slamming buttons on the alarm, but to know avail, so he simply threw it on the ground and jumped on it. He soon realized that this was not his room, it was pale white with only a bed, a lamp, a mirror, an empty closset, two doors, and another clock. One was a sliding door that led into a large room, it was totally bare, nothing in there but a computer-like dashboard, the walls were patches of green metal that overlapped the next one. Two white lights shined down from the cieling very high up.

As the boy looked in the mirror, he saw his eyes were blue again, and that his skin was normal, and his tounge asn't super long. The only thing different about him was that his hair had a green stripe going through it...He also noticed that his black T-shirt and pants, were the only clothing he had, no shoes or socks...

Sike cheefully glanced at the clock, it read 8:00am. "18 hours...The transformation is over!" He cheered as he went to check the device, which wasn't there anymore...He stumbled out of the room, into a seemingly never ending hallway, the door behind him was marked 'C36,' in large, bold digits, followed by a triangle...

"Why, hello 'C36.'" A soft voice chimed behind him.
He whirled around to see a tall, young woman in an off-white lab-coat.
"Name please?" She asked happily, a pen and paper on a clipboard in hand...

"Umm...Sikydo Lon Kazne..."

The lady scribbled on the paper, before pointing at a door down the way, which lit up instantly. She explained to him how in this hallway, nothing is marked but one's own room number. You can see yours, and only yours, and just because someone lives next to you one minute, the next, they might not. And how if you need to go somewhere, just think about it, and it will light up and you are the only one who'd see it...
PostPosted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 6:34 pm


Sikydo watched the door swing open to reveal a large, aditorium-like room, filled with at least 1000 chairs grouped in pairs. Kids were walking in through doors around the back of the auditorium, seats filling up fast. As he took a seat next to a girl who continuously looked in a small hand mirror, the last of the kids filled in, the lights dimming afterwards.

After a few minutes of quiet murmering, a voice boomed through the speakers as a stout man walked onto the stage at the front of the auditorium.
"Welcome to your new home, any questions?" He asked abrubtly, the girl next to Sikydo paying absolutely no attention while a boy near the front pairs of seats yelled at the man.
"Yeah! Why are we here?! And what what was with the box?!"

As soon as the voice died down, the man smiled as a small girl dressed in all white entered the stage. She wore a small pair of glasses, her eyes staring at the floor as she moved, as if she was not of her own will. Her maroon hair in a tight bun...

The man made a small notion and she let down her hair, said something, and touched a spot on her neck. Suddenly, her jaw jutted out as black hair spread like wild-fire. Her teeth grew out and became as sharp as knives as she lowered onto her arms, eyes glowing green.

At the horrific sight of the wolf-like beast, the audience was blindly struck in awe, giving the man a chance to speak.
"As you can see, this girl, along with all of you, have been mutated. You all are able to now use abilities far superior to a normal human. And they shall be used in competitions against eachother. Winners gain survival, money, and the chance to leave and keep your mutations, while losers will never be seen again."

At that, in a flash of light, the girl and the man dissapeared, the lights raising. The woman in white Sikydo met in the hall walked on stage, a smile on her face.
"The first challenge begins now," She began, "there will be 50 losers. The prize is to be announced after the winner is determined. Good luck."

A few minutes later, black chains shot out of every seat on the right in the pairs, strapping them to the chairs, kids screaming. Luckilly, Sikydo was on the left so the girl next to him got strapped. As this happened, a blue transparent cube with a button inside, green writing on the side.

-Figure this out or you lose and your partner suffers.-

Croakers
Vice Captain

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