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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 11:03 am


Name: Shino Yasamo

Pic: User Image

Age: 16

Gender: female

Birthday: may 17

Relationship: single

squad: 11

rank: Lieutenant

personality: sweet, calm, caring,

history: When She was three yaers old she lost her mother to arrancars and three years later her father became ill and arrancars came to attack her father. She took her fathers katana and killed one of them which made them run as far away they could. Her father was impressed by her skills and he told her that he didnt have long to go. After her father died she went to soul society to aquire trainning. Shino had her fathers katana and his zanpaktou which was a fire phinox.

Sealed Zanpaktou: User Image

Zanpaktou`s name: kamchi

Zanpaktou`s spirit: phinox

Hado: tears of posion (if it hits, it does posion damage and put poison on enemy)

Bakudo: phionx sai ( if it hits, it pins to the ground enemy with fire chains)

Healing Kido:Iyashi no te (Healing Hands): Using their own reaistu the user can press their hands to a small wound and heal it within 3-4 posts. = Low

Shikai

Pic of Shikai Weapon: User Image

Shikai name: phinox attack ( calls for the phinox to do damage)

Shikai Release command: flames call for the phinox (lasts 10 mins)

Shikai Attack one: phinox claw ( if it hits, it does 15% damage) A phinox comes from the katana and attacks with horriable sharp claws with posion damage and leaves the enemy posioned. The posion does 20 points of damage (lasts 5 rounds) The damage is not much but its some what decent.

Shikai Attack two: phinox blade (if it does hit, it does 50% damage)
the blade is on fire like a fire phinox and does 50% damage to the enemy leaving a burn mark on the enemy but dont worry it can be healed by friends. this has a 5 round cool down

Shikai Attack three: black phinox tears (if it hits, it does 45% damage)
the phinox comes forth as a black phinox to cry out black tear drops to attack the enemy. The phinox is then drawn back to the sword and then you wait 4 rounds so can deal the damage to go with the damage the phinox did.

Bankai: flamming phinox (if it hits, it lasts 20 min)
the user of this bankai get fire phinox wings along with a fire blade katana.

Pic of Bankai Weapon: User Image

Bankai name: fire of light

Bankai Release command: call apone the fires of life i call the PHINOX FLAME!!!

Bankai Attack one: flaming blade (high plus does massive damage)


Inner world:

Other:

Theme song:lifes like a boat (like rukia)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:19 pm


Ok just a few things. First since you are going for soldier I need you to cross out your third shikai and your bankai attacks. Soldiers only get up to their second shikai.

Next your kido, There is a list of pre-made kido that you`ll need to use. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21902627

Also I need you to go into more detail on exactly what your skikai and bankai attacks do.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:25 pm


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Ok just a few things. First since you are going for soldier I need you to cross out your third shikai and your bankai attacks. Soldiers only get up to their second shikai.

Next your kido, There is a list of pre-made kido that you`ll need to use. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21902627

Also I need you to go into more detail on exactly what your skikai and bankai attacks do.


i would like to have a bonkai so what level is that? like i said its been a while sence i watched it
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:28 pm


sara72pokemon
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Ok just a few things. First since you are going for soldier I need you to cross out your third shikai and your bankai attacks. Soldiers only get up to their second shikai.

Next your kido, There is a list of pre-made kido that you`ll need to use. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21902627

Also I need you to go into more detail on exactly what your skikai and bankai attacks do.


i would like to have a bonkai so what level is that? like i said its been a while sence i watched it


The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:30 pm


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sara72pokemon
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Ok just a few things. First since you are going for soldier I need you to cross out your third shikai and your bankai attacks. Soldiers only get up to their second shikai.

Next your kido, There is a list of pre-made kido that you`ll need to use. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21902627

Also I need you to go into more detail on exactly what your skikai and bankai attacks do.


i would like to have a bonkai so what level is that? like i said its been a while sence i watched it


The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.


okay ill be lieutenant then lol
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:34 pm


sara72pokemon
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sara72pokemon
Kronovox
Ok just a few things. First since you are going for soldier I need you to cross out your third shikai and your bankai attacks. Soldiers only get up to their second shikai.

Next your kido, There is a list of pre-made kido that you`ll need to use. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21902627

Also I need you to go into more detail on exactly what your skikai and bankai attacks do.


i would like to have a bonkai so what level is that? like i said its been a while sence i watched it


The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.


okay ill be lieutenant then lol


All right.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:04 pm


Kronovox
sara72pokemon
Kronovox
sara72pokemon
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Ok just a few things. First since you are going for soldier I need you to cross out your third shikai and your bankai attacks. Soldiers only get up to their second shikai.

Next your kido, There is a list of pre-made kido that you`ll need to use. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21902627

Also I need you to go into more detail on exactly what your skikai and bankai attacks do.


i would like to have a bonkai so what level is that? like i said its been a while sence i watched it


The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.


okay ill be lieutenant then lol


All right.


besides adding dicriptions should i add or take away anything else?
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:13 pm


sara72pokemon
Kronovox
sara72pokemon
Kronovox
sara72pokemon
Kronovox
Ok just a few things. First since you are going for soldier I need you to cross out your third shikai and your bankai attacks. Soldiers only get up to their second shikai.

Next your kido, There is a list of pre-made kido that you`ll need to use. http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21902627

Also I need you to go into more detail on exactly what your skikai and bankai attacks do.


i would like to have a bonkai so what level is that? like i said its been a while sence i watched it


The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.


okay ill be lieutenant then lol


All right.


besides adding dicriptions should i add or take away anything else?


Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:17 pm


Kronovox
sara72pokemon
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sara72pokemon
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The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.


okay ill be lieutenant then lol


All right.


besides adding dicriptions should i add or take away anything else?


Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.

i just did that then ill add the discritptions to the ones that need it
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:25 pm


Kronovox
sara72pokemon
Kronovox
sara72pokemon
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The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.


okay ill be lieutenant then lol


All right.


besides adding dicriptions should i add or take away anything else?


Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.


okay you can cheack it and tell me what i need to improve

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:32 pm


sara72pokemon
Kronovox
sara72pokemon
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sara72pokemon
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The highest rank you can have in that squad only gives you first bankai which is Lieutenant. Only captains get both bankai.


okay ill be lieutenant then lol


All right.


besides adding dicriptions should i add or take away anything else?


Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.


okay you can cheack it and tell me what i need to improve


Ok good but just two things first reword your attacks so that they arnt auto hits by putting like "If they hit they will do such and such." Then put how many posts you must wait before doing the attack again.

Second your kido still needs to be changed.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:33 pm


Kronovox
sara72pokemon
Kronovox
sara72pokemon
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All right.


besides adding dicriptions should i add or take away anything else?


Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.


okay you can cheack it and tell me what i need to improve


Ok good but just two things first reword your attacks so that they arnt auto hits by putting like "If they hit they will do such and such." Then put how many posts you must wait before doing the attack again.

Second your kido still needs to be changed.

the kido i got from the link that you gave me but okay ill reword it but it is good right?

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:40 pm


sara72pokemon
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sara72pokemon
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sara72pokemon
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All right.


besides adding dicriptions should i add or take away anything else?


Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.


okay you can cheack it and tell me what i need to improve


Ok good but just two things first reword your attacks so that they arnt auto hits by putting like "If they hit they will do such and such." Then put how many posts you must wait before doing the attack again.

Second your kido still needs to be changed.

the kido i got from the link that you gave me but okay ill reword it but it is good right?


Ah ok sorry didnt recognize one of the kido i made myself but once the rewordings done itlll be good to go.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:52 pm


Kronovox
sara72pokemon
Kronovox
sara72pokemon
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Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.


okay you can cheack it and tell me what i need to improve


Ok good but just two things first reword your attacks so that they arnt auto hits by putting like "If they hit they will do such and such." Then put how many posts you must wait before doing the attack again.

Second your kido still needs to be changed.

the kido i got from the link that you gave me but okay ill reword it but it is good right?


Ah ok sorry didnt recognize one of the kido i made myself but once the rewordings done itlll be good to go.


okay added stuff to it like the posion one and the posion lasts 5 rounds max unless you have an antidot

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:56 pm


sara72pokemon
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sara72pokemon
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sara72pokemon
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Well take out the home made kido and use the ones already made please >.< ther then that just cross out the last bankai attack.


okay you can cheack it and tell me what i need to improve


Ok good but just two things first reword your attacks so that they arnt auto hits by putting like "If they hit they will do such and such." Then put how many posts you must wait before doing the attack again.

Second your kido still needs to be changed.

the kido i got from the link that you gave me but okay ill reword it but it is good right?


Ah ok sorry didnt recognize one of the kido i made myself but once the rewordings done itlll be good to go.


okay added stuff to it like the posion one and the posion lasts 5 rounds max unless you have an antidot


I meant limit on the shikai and bankai attacks not the kido.
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