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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:24 pm
So, I might publish this, I might not. Tell me whatcha think! ^^ If three people say they'd like me to post more, I will! But until then...
Masked Love "Ow! Taisku, stop it!" Broken yelled, tossing a pillow at her brother. Taisku stepped effortlessly out of range, then hurled a stuffed animal at her. It grazed her ear. "C'mon, squirt! Get up! The food's gettin' cold!" he urged. Broken sat up. "Taisku, the more you annoy me, the slower it'll take me! Now get out of my room!" Taisku snickered, then left, closing the door behind him. She heard him thundering down the ancient stairs. Broken stood up and sighed. Her brother acted like he was twelve rather than seventeen! She looked around her dark room. Her canopy bed was frayed and tattered. It was a snowy white, her sheets were black and her quilt was velvet red. She had a balcony that showed the town and ocean at a glimsp. The rest of her room was a mess. C.D's, books, pepers, dolls, DVD's, textbooks. A closet full of clothes. She sighed again and worked her way to the closet. She selected a simple black rose spagetti strap, a short black latex skort, and her fishnet tights. She hastily put on her crimson heels, snatched her backpack and dashed down the stairs. In the kitchen, she stiffened. Her mother was at the table. She solemly sat down, and began eating her pancakes.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 11:05 am
It's too small to judge but some of the detail is good and I'm intrigued by the name Broken. I like that name.
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 9:47 am
Thanks, I figured a nickname will work better than her real name. I have written more, but my dad's all edgy because none of my things are copyrighted. *rolls eyes* No one would want to take my stories!
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Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:29 pm
Awesome awesome awesome. ^.^
Lol, I'm in the story!!! xD Jk.
Lemme guess, her mom TOTALLY doesn't approve of the outfit, right? I want more... lol, but if you don't want to post it, it's okay.
Will you read over my new story idea? Here's the link; http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=10430097
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 5:38 pm
Of course. I've written more, I just haven't posted it yet. I will sometime this week, promise. ^^ But you like it? And I liked the nickname a lot, so I figured, it goes with the plot and everything, so why not? heart
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 2:09 pm
^.^ Yes, of course I like it!!! ^.^ Can't wait for more!!!!!!
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:52 pm
Actuaaly, I have a quizilla account, and I made a quiz out of what I have so far. Look up "Evangilinae" and that'll be one of 'em. ^^ Otherwise, I'll post soon.
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