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dizzy dizzy2's Journal my name is dizzy dizzy2 and i am planing on writing my poetry and other things that i find interestingin this Journal but mostly poems i love poems


dizzy dizzy2
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a change of poetry to a vampire type poem
BLOOD BY dizzy

Blood dripping onto your soft red lips,
Drinking from the vain of one of your victims.
The crimson blood flowing through your fangs,
Draining them to the point of there death.

Feeling the power as the blood surges through you,
Gaining the strength being able to fly the night,
Looking, searching for a new pure body to stalk,
Searching for a fresh blood and young neck to bite.

Getting exited from the site of your blood,
My heart beating faster as you come into sight,
Hypnotising you to prevent you from screaming,
Then drinking your blood until you go limp and finally die.

Blood dripping onto your soft red lips,
Drinking from the vain of one of your victims.
The crimson blood flowing through your fangs,
Draining them to the point of there death.





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dynamo_1
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comment Commented on: Thu May 12, 2005 @ 04:58pm
Very good one. I like it a lot. It is almost like a vampire itself had written it. 3nodding biggrin


comment Commented on: Fri May 13, 2005 @ 02:12pm
mmm....nice...diffrent..but nice



babyj1989
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Teia_fallenangel
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comment Commented on: Thu May 19, 2005 @ 06:39pm
gonk AHHHHHHHH!!!!!! sweatdrop *runs away now* Lol j/k not really I'm to lazy to run, but that was a ...differnt one..or um...um....I'm gonna stop trying now...don't bite me.....please sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Mon Jun 20, 2005 @ 02:32pm
meh once againe I state my disslike fore this sort of stuff

well ya know whatever

later



dr love aka DL
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gothic changeling
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comment Commented on: Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 11:22am
nice...... stare


comment Commented on: Sun Oct 23, 2005 @ 02:27pm
screw what ever they said. its verry good. it's so good that it's making me hungry 4 some blood right now *licks lips* can i have urs dizzy dizzy2?



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