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dizzy dizzy2's Journal my name is dizzy dizzy2 and i am planing on writing my poetry and other things that i find interestingin this Journal but mostly poems i love poems


dizzy dizzy2
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a poem from the bottom of my heart
Sorry By Dizzy

i know that i have hurt youand i know that your in pain,
for this im deeply sorry and with you im not insain.
you mean the world to me and i never new this until,
you finally left me and i was asking myself if this was for real.

my insides were being torn out through my mouth that is how i feel,
i realized that i loved you more then i know and that what i welt was real.
i know i did somthing i shouldnt have and for that i am deeply sorry,
please will you for give me and come back so me cos i cant live with out you.

i have done all i can to make you realize that this is true that every breath i take every beat of my heart is because of you,
im feeling pain oh so intence that ive never felt before it is blinding and nothing i would like any one to go through.

now you have came back to me i never want to loose you,
no matter what i do i will promise that i will never hert you.
ive cut myself to prove this and ive done moush more then that,
and im trully sorry for ever doing this to you will you ever forgive me for that?

i felt like i was being touched hanged up by my toes,
while getting my insides suched out through a straw thats how it goes.
but my tourcher could never compear with yours cos i know how you felt and for this im deeply trully sorry,
im sorry for the wat i hurt you and for what you had to go through and im glad we are together so i can make it right.





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devilchik89
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comment Commented on: Fri Dec 24, 2004 @ 12:36am
dizzy that is a beautiful poem!!! i have tears in my eyes!!!


comment Commented on: Mon Dec 27, 2004 @ 02:36pm
Woah, man, you should write lyrics to songs or poems as a profession! eek



Rici
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_-Paige-_ PML
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comment Commented on: Thu Jan 20, 2005 @ 10:16pm
wow thats a great poem


comment Commented on: Sat Mar 26, 2005 @ 07:53pm
......thats so lovely crying brings back memories



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