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3 Poems for 3 people I love.


You.

Your beauty is like the untouched diamond
Glimmering and shining in the light.
But like any rock, you’re rough around the edges
You can cut everything down
And you never wish to be touched
But at the same time
You wish to be with someone
The special someone just for you
Finding that someone is a journey
A journey that can stun and maim the strongest.


The slum of reality


However the process of seeking the truth,
Is perfected by repeatedly questioning yourself
The fake real, or the real fake?
Which is real?
The real, real is a dimmed rock,
Unpolished by the standard of a society
A society that overlooks all that aren’t a diamond
And picks up the next ruby,
Which is stained with the blood of a thousand peoples.
A Stained Purgatorial Alter,
Forever flung to a limbo of indecision.


A heart and mind in love.

Mentally exhausted to the point of eternal bleeding
A heart that has been finally kicked
One, two, and many more times.
A body incapable of a being of what you desire.
Which is more important?
A lost child stuck in a room full of laughing white faces
Raped by feelings I do not wish to have
Why couldn’t things be different?
Karma is a destiny, but it’s a destiny chosen by us.
Or the desire to be touched
Touched by someone who cares for you
Who is there to heal the wounds?
Made by the destructive forces of hate, lust, and jealousy.
The weeds that only continue to take, and take
What is rightfully ours,
Is a love that knows no bounds.
But it takes a fool to learn
Love, loves no one.
It never knows when the time is right.
It simply just is.
Logically it’s an annoyance
Emotionally it can bring forth
A sadness indescribable by humanity
Or overwhelming happiness that
Can leave you smiling for hours on end
Just by a kiss on the cheek
For what seems like half a minute.



The second is about me.
The third is about a guy friend and myself.
They aren't well written,
and they aren't so much poems as they are metaphoric rants.






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Captain Stumps
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 11:04pm
Wow, lovey. I love them all.
Especially the first one.
I definitely think that you should be a writer of some sort. 3nodding
I wish I could write like that. :/
Kudos, love.


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