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Works of a yinyang soul

Just rants about things I'm going through, mostly in poem form

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work in progress tell me how to make it better I’m so tired of you telling me I messed up. I am tired of living under your rules. I just want to spread my wings And be who I am. Please don’t hold me down. Please don’t tell me how to fly. I know you love me. I know that you want the best for me. But please let me fly or fall on my own. You only hurt me more and more. You just make me feel stupider. I want to make you proud. But that just makes me fail even more For a brake down when I make one mistake. For I know you will be upset. Please don’t hold me down. Please don’t tell me how to fly. I love you more than anything. You brought me into this world. But you put to much pressure on me. If you let me fly on my own. I am sure I will make you proud. But if you continue to push me down And tell me how to live my life. I will die.

Posted by: Fireearth neko Mon Jan 21, 2008 @ 11:53pm

I'm tired of you telling me what to do. I am tired of you pushing me down. I am tired of being called useless. I am tired of believing you. I am who I am and you can't change that.

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ErebGaur
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Tue Jan 22, 2008 @ 02:08pm

I think there's just a spelling error, other then that it looks good to me. It seems a little sad, but it also looks like something that needed to be said.

Miss-Lucy-Steamboat
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Tue Jan 29, 2008 @ 04:12am

I think its amazing. It explains exactly what a lot of people go through.

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