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Basicly, this place is for my quite disturbing story. Other than that, I have some crappy stuff. Emotions, thoughts, stuff like that. Yeah, I know it's boring. Skip that crap and read the story. I demand it!!!
Sorry about the hold up for Chapter Four, so I have a special. Another Double Feature. I'll be skipping Chapter Five because it's the layout of the house.


Ch. 4

The sun had just come out as Drew put the last box in his room. He had gone through the house twice already, seeing every room. In each room there was at least four boxes. Katelyn walks into teh room.
"The others should be here soon."
"Are all their stuff already here?" Drew walks over to her.
"Not everything. They still have some furniture to bring for the upstairs living room." Katelyn points upward and steps back, out of the doorway. Drew goes into the hallway and points down one side of the hall.
"And the stairs are that way?"
"Correct."
"But where's your bedroom?" Drew leans agains the wall.
"Beside my brother's bedroom."
"Which is where?"
"Next door down on the right." She points in the same direction Drew did when talking about the stairs. Katelyn drops her arm to her side and leans against the wal like Drew, beside him.
"Now isn't that convienent?" He gets closer to her, and because of the hieght difference, he bends down for a kiss. They get an inch away from a kiss, and then hear a deep voice echo through the hall.
"What's going on?" They turn and see Kaji's shocked face.
"Nothing Kaji." Drew moves away from Katelyn and walk towards and past Kaji.
"Why are you even here Drew?"
"He found out last night that he was kicked out. I helped him move in last night." Katelyn walks towards Kaji and passes by him.

Drew walks into the downstairs living room and finds Jessie and Amy sitting on the couch. Amy has her arm wrapped around Jessie. Drew sneaks up behind them and jumps up to scare them. They both jump.
"Cut that out you two!"
"Bite me Drew." Amy looks agrily at him. Jessie flicks him off.
"Yeah ******** you too Jes." Drew goes to the front door and opens it after hearing several knocks. At the door is Ashley.
"Thanks Drew, I have my hands full." She walks in carrying a box. "Drew!!!!"
A clatter of foot steps rushes down the steps. Julia appears at the bottom of the stairs.
"Drew!!" She runs over to him, almost knocking Ashley over, and jumps on Drew, wrapping her legs and arms around him.
"Um....hi Julia." Drew stumbles but finds his balance. Everyone hears more foot steps coming down the steps and hear a voice, but see no one.
"Julia, why'd you run off? I thought you were having fun with me." Charlie appears on the steps and sees her attached to Drew. "Oh, Drew. What are you doing her?"
"Moving in." Julia gets off of him with a gasp. She grabs his face with her hands and brings his head to her, kissing him passoinately.


Ch. 6

Drew sits on the downstairs living room couch with his legs crossed indian style. Beside him sits Kaji and Charlie, on on each side. In the lounge chair sits Jessie with Amy on her lap. Ashley sits on the floor and Micheal stands behind the couch. Julia is sitting on the floor, but directly in front of Drew, having her head almost in his lap. Katelyn's standing in front of everyone.
"What the hell is going on? We've been living here in this house for less than an hour, and look at us!"
"Um, Katelyn?" Kaji speaks up.
"Yes?"
"Could you move, you're blocking the tv."
"Fine you pushy b*****d." She walks to Drew, reaching over Julia, and grabs his ear. By his ear she drags him out of the room and up the stairs. Kaji picks up the remote and turns on the tv.
Amy starts playing with Jessie's hair and then kisses her. Charlie looks away from the tv and sees them making out.
"Damn, this is better than anything on tv!" Charlie continues to watch them.

Upstairs, Katelyn takes Drew to her extra room. Before she opens the door, she smiles at him and picks up a baseball bat, laying at the door.
"What's the bat for?" Drew asks, pointing at the bat.
"Sedative." She smiles at him again.
"Seda....?" Before he can finish, she hits him in the head with the bat, knocking him unconcious.

Drew slowly becomes concious. As he becomes more aware of his surroundings, he finds he's laying on a large bed, with one hand shackled to the bed, and his shirt off.
"What happened?" He runs his free hand through his hear, and looks around. He sees nothing except two doors, one on each end of the room. The door on his right opens and Katelyn's head pops through the opening, and she sees him awake in the bed.
"Oh, good, you're awake."
"Where the hell am I ?" Drew inspects his shackle and tries to pull it off.
"That won't work. It only opens by key. You're in my extra room." Katelyn goes to the bed and sits on the edge.
"But, what am I doing here?"
"Recieving punishment. You have to be punished." She turns around where he can only see her back and she takes off her shirt.
"What are you doing!!??"
"Giving punishment." He sees her move her hands near her front and then hears a button peing pushed. Out of the floor in front of the bed, a tv comes up. It turns on and it starts showing The Wiggles.
"MAKE IT STOP!!!" Drew screams out.
"But it's your punishment." She turns around, facing him. He instantly realizes that only her long black hair is covering her breasts.
"What the hell are you do....." Suddenly, the door that Katelyn had come through busts down. Charlie walks in through the doorway.
"KATELYN!!!" Charlie yells out.
"What?"






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Malaf
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 04:33am
o.o i wasnt in the living room o.o
maybe i was glued to the pc playing ffxi, idk
ne wayz i dont know what yall were doing , but i herd everything from my room ;.; u woke me up stare


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 04:36am
If you saw the layout, you'll find your room is no where close to Katelyn's room. I woke up on the same day.



Lebowski 666
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Malaf
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 04:49pm
thats how loud it was.... (it took me 7 min. to remember how to spell loud* stare


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 10:37pm
You were down stairs the whole time.



Lebowski 666
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Malaf
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 01, 2005 @ 02:55am
i was eek i didnt even no ... crying


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 01, 2005 @ 05:12am
eek *stares* ........i dont know what to say.......that was very good *claps hands slowly*



scarletstardust
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Lebowski 666
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 01, 2005 @ 02:31pm
No, it's not good at all. I'm a horrible writer, and I'm surprised that you like it.


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 02, 2005 @ 12:15am
well.. if u ever get writers block , i know something that can probably help yous (just sayin) 3nodding



Malaf
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scarletstardust
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 02, 2005 @ 01:29am
its better than the crap i write


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 02, 2005 @ 03:53am
You don't write crap. I do. And everyone knows it. I just try to put in complex plots that no one understands.



Lebowski 666
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 12:35am
no you dont i want to read the rest now im in suspense i wanna know what Charlie does, ugh suspense is a crule master


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 01:36am
You'll find out Wednesday.



Lebowski 666
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Omichan
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 07:14am
I like the parts that you scratched out in your notebook. Just had to say that. And the only person who writes totally sucks at writing stories is ME!!! DON'T ARGUE WITH ME!!!! scream .........That is all. blaugh


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 12:42pm
Omikron, those parts are to sick for anyone to read.



Lebowski 666
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scarletstardust
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:23pm
i wanna read it the part yo uscratched out i want to i want to!


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 04, 2005 @ 01:57am
Trust me, you don't.



Lebowski 666
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scarletstardust
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 04, 2005 @ 02:36am
oh but i do i belive i can handle it


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 06, 2005 @ 05:04am
The main part I scratched out is a bunch of girl-on-girl action.



Lebowski 666
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scarletstardust
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 07, 2005 @ 01:29am
@-@ nevermind! sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 07, 2005 @ 02:28am
Told ya, but noooooooo, don't listen to me. No one ever listens to me.



Lebowski 666
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 10, 2005 @ 02:55am
sweatdrop sorry


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 10, 2005 @ 04:13pm
It's okay.



Lebowski 666
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