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CHAPTER 3- ATTACK
Recent reviewers have demanded more action so this chapter will have more of that.
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Li was sitting in the garden thinking. He had been with the Asakuras and their friends for three weeks and that was long enough. His head injury had finally healed and it was time to go. 'Maybe I should leave without telling them.' thought Li. No, then they'd come looking for me. 'I'd better go find Ramek'.

Li searched around the house calling Rameks name. He heard voices coming out of Ren's room and went closer to listen.

"Eliza, get off me!" that was Ramek's voice.

"Come on Ramek, you know you want me!"

"You're a married woman!"

"Not anymore! Me and Faust are divorcing!"

"Nonononono!! Eliza, please don't touch me there! Oh..god, Eliza! Please stop..now."

"..."

"Eliza, we could get caught!"

"..."

"GET OFF!"

A loud shriek and a crash. "Ah! Ramek, you a*****e! I can't believe I let you do that that to me!"

"You started it!"

"Whatever! Wait till I tell Faust!"

"NO! Eliza! Wait!"

An angry Eliza drifted through the wall and out of the house. Ramek followed shortly after. Li stopped him. "Ramek, we're leaving."

"What? Why?!"

"We've been here long enough. Come on, lets go."

Li walked into the living room where everybody was watching a pyr8 copy of Stealth.

"Yoh, can I talk to you?"

"Sure, whats up?"

"Look, Yoh, I can't thank you enough for saving me that day and you guys have just been great. But, I think it's time I left."

"Are you sure about this Li?"

"Yeah. You've got enough people in you're house anyway."

"We're all gonna miss ya man. Even Anna."

"Heh. Thanks. Well, see ya."

And with that, he left.

"Horo tore his eyes from the screen to see Li leaving.

'Where's he going?'
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Li walked out of the onsen, wondering where he would go next. Maybe I should go to Dobi village. Never been there before. Or maybe I should go back home. Haven't seen Grampa in months. Li's thoughts were interrupted by someone calling his name behind him.

"Li! Wait!"

He turned around to face Horo Horo. "Dude? Why are you leaving?"

"Why should I stay?"

"Aw, come on! You're way more fun than everyone else there!"

"Sorry man, I have to go."

Horo realised he wasn't going to win this arguement. "At least let me come with you. Not all the way,but... you know..."

"Fine."
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IN THE DESSERT
"Walking blows." Said Li."Wanna fly?"

"Huh?" It took a few seconds for Horo to register what Li was asking. "I can't fly!"

"Yes you can."

Li grabbed Horo's wrist and took off into the air.

"WAAAAHHHHH!! SLOW DOWN!!!!"

"Okay." Li made an adrupt halt. They were floating over forty stories high.

"You know what?" said Horo, looking down and almost passing out. "I think I'd rather walk."

Li gently lowered Horo to the ground. Suddenly-

"Li Nohara! We meet again!!!"

Li and Horo turned to face a Doushii holding seven talismins in his hand. He was wearing a large violet robe. His face was heavily scarred he was completely bald.

"You again!! Didn't I beat you hard enough last time?"

"No you didn't. But you made quite a mess of my kyonshiis though. And this time I've brought more."

Fourteen kyonshiis rose out of the earth, all wielding maces or swords. They attacked.

"Ramek! Into the swords!" Li drew his blades and threw them into the air. Ramek separated himself in two and entered the swords. With one swift movement, Li caught the swords and sliced through three kyonshiis at once. The remaining eleven pisitoned themselves in a circle around Li. He flew into the air, put his swords together and pointed them at the kyonshiis.

(A/N Ooh! Ooh! Here comes the signature move!!!)

"Stroblitz Cannon!!!"

A large blue/purple beam shot out of Li's swords and demolished the kyonshiis, leaving behind a large steaming crater.

Horo was impressed. "Nice work Li! I would have helped, but I left my board at home. But wait! I have my nikupasi! I can use that as a medium!"

"Yeah, but the fight's over."

"THAT'S WHAT YOU THINK FOOL!" The doushii stood up, having barely survived Li's attack. About 30 more kyonshiis rose from the ground all larger and tougher looking.

Li sweatdropped. "Heh heh! Guess I spoke to soon!"

Having already archieved spirit control, Li made his attack.

"Kororo! Into the Nikupasi! Seconds later, Horo was aside Li, freezing the kyonshiis then Li would smash them. But something wasn't right. The number of kyonshiis never seemed to go down. It was like more and more of them kept coming.

Then Li realised how to beat them "We have to take out the doushii!"

Dodging between Kyonshiis, Li and Horo ran for the Doshii.

"Kyonshiis! Protect me!"

The kyonshiis formed a circle around their master. Li sighed. "There goes my plan. Maybe we should- "

But before Li could continue, a bright white beam from from the sky shot the through the doshiis heart and he dropped to the ground, dead.The kyonshiis dissappeared. Flying high above the scene, were the sex-laws.

(A/N No, thats not a typo. If you don't understand, go back to chapter 1.)

"Li Nohara! We will give you one last chance to join us, or face destruction!" Marco called from the sky.

"Over my dead body!"

"So be it!"

The Sex-Laws attacked . Li and Horo summoned giant spirit control and defended. Rameks form was a huge mech version of himself with bigger swords and large black wings. We all know what Horo's looks like so um...yeah.

The Sex-Laws continued their assault, pounding against Li's and Horo's defences with their 'holy' spirits. Li dropped his defence. It was time for a counter attack. Ramek threw back his arms and swung forth his enormous swords as hard as he could. The blades slashed through three of the Sex-Laws spirits, breaking their spirit control.

Horo fired off with a giant sized Icicle Assault which was like shooting sky-scrapers. By the time they were finished, half the Sex-Laws were down. Marco's hulking spirit was the first to recover.

"Don't get too cocky now boys!!! As long as we are down, there always d***o Maiden Jeanne!"

(A/N Yes, she had to change her name too. Remember? The prostitution?)

Now, in case you've forgotten, I'd like to remind you that Horo and Li were in the dessert when the sex laws attacked.

The Iron maiden rose out of the sands and opened with a loud creak. Jeanne stepped out in her usual armour.

"Unfaithful warriors, prepare to be vanquished! Mosh! Destroy them!"

The large blue baby-like spirit appeared above Jeanne and swung it's large axe. Ramek took off into the skies and flapped his wings, creating an enormous gust, which blew Mosh off his attack. Mosh fell the the sands with a loud BOOM and lay there, still.

Horo laughed "Woah, that was easy."

"Too easy."

Before they could react, Mosh leapt from the ground and in one swift movement, slammed Kororo to the ground, and knocked Ramek out of the sky with his axe.

Slowly, Li's spirit stood and took off into the air, and pointed both swords at Mosh.

"We have to end this now, or we'll run out of furyoku trying!"

Horo used his ice powers to freeze Mosh in place so he couldn't dodge Li's attack.

Li took a deep breath, and summoned every last bit of Furyoku that was left in him. "Okay, Ramek. We've never had to do this before and it's only for last resorts. If this works, we will completely run out of furyoku and I'll probably black out. But this is the only way out of this."

Rameks swords started glowing. Slowly, energy began to build up around them.

Jeanne was having a nervous breakdown " MOSH PLEASE!!!! UNFREEZE YOURSELF AND DESTROY HIM!!!! FOR GOD'S SAKE, I'LL MISS THE SALE AT DUREM!!"

Slowly, the ice around Mosh started cracking. Time was running out.

"Now or never Li!" Horo yelled, re-freezing Mosh.

"OMEGA STROBLITZ!!!"

A dozen energy beams fired off Rameks sword and collided with Mosh. The ice was vaporised instantly. Jeanne lost spirit control and Mosh was obliterated under the intence force of Li's attack.

Before the Sex-Laws fled, Marco yelled one thing. "Know this Li!!! You and you're friends are dead!!!"
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OOOOOHHHHHH!!! Looks like Hao has competition!!! Li seems to be VERY powerful Shaman! Well, bye!

~Ramek~






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Gigabyte
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 06:47pm
LE GASP...*tear* that was brilliant pure brillience!!!! MORE I NEED MORE!!! scream lol xd


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 06:58pm
okaystarts typing up chapter 4



Kaos07
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Gigabyte
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 07:17pm
*is waiting* *has a brainwave* write a book!!! and photo copy it loads of times and sell it!! lol....it would never work but its an idea lol


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