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Pura vida.
Cold
Someone i know is dying
and hiding all the pain
as i, am crying
the tears fall down the drain

i cant help to think
that this might be a nightmare
As a life is on the brink
as i whisper a silent preyer

Its not my falut shes dying
it was a deadly disease
i am still crying
through the cold light breeze

As im at the funeral
wearing all black
crying my tears as usual
as a life falls off a track

Shes hidden so much pain
through dark nights and cold days
as death cannot be explained
as she slowly flies away

-Brixxer






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Terrifyingly twisted...
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 05:53pm
Is this something based on a true stroy? If so than I'm sorry.
Even it is, it's very good^_^


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 01:06am
if actually did die then i'm very sorry but even still great poem 4laugh



INSANElittleMonkey
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GothRat
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 01:59am
gorgeous! absolutely gorgeous! I love it!


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 02:18am
wow... what a poem. i give it a 9/10.



Nymphomaniacal Virgin
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 02:40am
That was wonderful.


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 20, 2005 @ 06:11pm
Well it was about to be a true story about my aunt. But she survived the 13 surgeries smile



Brixxer
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Chaos_Alchemist
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 29, 2005 @ 02:36am
*loyal_Marauder cries* I loved it, so sad, but I was happy you commented that ur aunt was ok, that made me feel good sweatdrop


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