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Poems That I Write
These are poems that I write to express myself. Like them or not. If you don't like them then don't read them. If you do, I sure write a lot.
Darkness



Darkness surrounds,

It surrounds her,

Till she is no more,

It swallows her up,

Into its depth,

Until all she can see,

Is darkness,

All she can see is the evil,

All the evil that has been done in the world,

Has now come out in one single minute,

It is releasing its anger on her,

When she has done nothing,

But lived in this hell of a world,

She tries to save herself,

And everybody else,

From being swallowed,

Into despair,

She tries to escape,

From the pit she is in,

But she can’t,

She can’t because there is no way out,

And there will never be a way out,

Because darkness lives on forever,

It will never die,

No matter how hard she tries.

~Naomi Cloukey~






User Comments: [2]
FallonFitzy522
Community Member





Thu Oct 23, 2008 @ 09:59pm


Jeez, Naomi! Is this about the dream you had? I think it is. This is a great poem about it anyway.


MissMurder014
Community Member





Fri Oct 24, 2008 @ 03:11am


yes it is about the dream. thx


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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