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Brisinger's Demented thoughts
Originally, this journal was just for my thoughts, but now, I am writing a story!! The full bio of my rp character Sevath. READ!!!
Hey everybody! This be a very important entry today.... Sevath is thinking of making his journal into a story.... Not the journal itself, but you know what I mean! Well, the story will be about my character Sevath, and his mysterious past.... Nifty, eh? Well anyways, while making a profile for another rp application today, I came down to my profile, and while I was typing it, a thought occured to me... In Sevath's bio, I always put the same thing.....
"He has a past far too tangled and obscured with heinous events to be written here....."
And then I just add on to that so that it'll fit in with the rp.... But now that I think about it, no one really knows about that far tangled past of his... no one.... A few people have a vague image of the past about his drake, but no one knows the full story....
The full story.... of how it all happend.... of everything... Of how he got his fire powers, of how he slew his own people, and condemned his own race into extnction, Of everything, that happend, in the past. And maybe, if I can gather enough brain power and don't go brain dead, I might do the adventures of Sevath's days in other rps. Like the Winding Road, or the Depths of Hell. They'll be like, small events in his life. They will ofcourse, have happend after the great past story I tell you guys.

But, the above is only to fill you in on what this entry is about. In order for me to be able to sucessfully make this story, I need you guys!! First off, how do you guys want me to make the entries? Should I split up each story into small chapters, and make each chapter a small journal entry? Or should I just tell each story in one huge entry, with huge paragraphs and everything?
I am mostly making this so that you guys can read it, so I need your opinions!! Do comment and tell!






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Calope0
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 18, 2006 @ 08:07pm
Write a little more than this. Break it up into a few paragraphs and it'll work wonderously.


commentCommented on: Tue Feb 21, 2006 @ 03:18am
I also think you should break it up into chapters. It would be more interesting.



nekochan341
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Violet the Wind Master
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 05, 2006 @ 11:24pm
Sounds like fun! I want to know more about Sevath. 3nodding Might help me roleplay. Um... yea. Definetly put it in chapters so your brain doesn't explode trying to write it all at once. Brain meltdowns are not fun. Not fun at all. If you write it in chapters, it will add to the suspense of the reader and give you more time to think of things to say. Plus, if you wrote it all at once, that would be really long and people have short attention spans. You want their attention all the way.


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