Panel 1 Background - A club called The Blitz. There are a few people mingling outside. Two signs are hung up, both obvious and easy to read. One says "Must be 21 and over to enter" or something similar. The other says "$5.00 cover charge." Frontground - Blue and Generic Bouncer Man, who looks like a generic bouncer might (buff, bald, wearing a T-shirt advertising his work place) are facing each other. Blue is in uniform, holding a pizza bag. Generic Bouncer Man has one arm over his chest, the other pointing a thumb to the entrance. Dialogue -GBM: "No, I didn't order a pizza. Go on inside, maybe it's for one of the bartenders."
Panel 2 Background - A generic looking bar on the inside. Bottles on the wall, bartender behind a bar, a few people sitting at said bar. Maybe draw in some complimentary peanuts or some such. A beer sign wouldn't hurt, either. Foreground - Blue, still holding the pizza bag and now nonchalantly whistling, is walking decidedly towards the back of the building. Dialogue -Blue: Maybe draw a little music note, showing that he's nonchalantly whistling.
Panel 3 Background - Two walls meet. No more bar. Maybe a poster or some beer signs? Nothing really special needs to be here. Foreground - Blue is pushing open the door to the men's bathroom and walking in. He's still holding the pizza bag. Dialogue - None.
Panel 4 Background - Same as last. Foreground - Blue is coming out of the bathroom wearing jeans, a nice button-up shirt and a blazer jacket. He's carrying the pizza bag, which is now empty, with the hand that's keeping the bathroom door open. He's holding up a finger with his other hand. Dialogue -Blue: "I'll take a Tecate!"
Undercover Screenname · Wed Dec 06, 2006 @ 05:25am · 0 Comments |