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TEENAGE DRAMA!!!
A Stubborn Tear
Tears roll down her cheeks.
Setting free all of her pain,
Yet one tear refuses to fall.
One stubborn tear refuses to let go.
One stubborn tear refuses to give up.
Do the tears stop? No.
Just that one tear will not fall free.

This is a short poem (obviously), it crossed my mind when...sadly enough...when I was crying.






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mhpr1nc35509
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 21, 2005 @ 03:34pm
it's good. what is it about?


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 21, 2005 @ 04:37pm
why do you write such good poetry?



oakcliffchica
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nightngale
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 21, 2005 @ 05:55pm
Morgan: Umm...it's about a tear that wouldn't fall.
Karin: lol umm....idk...but it takes for me to be really depressed to be good at it.


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 24, 2005 @ 05:54pm
-smiles and hugs her- i like it =x can i save it?



Demonic Affliction
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Demonic Affliction
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 24, 2005 @ 05:55pm
-smiles and hugs her- i like it =x mind if i save it?


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 24, 2005 @ 09:14pm
Sure! go ahead.



nightngale
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