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um..ok i weak in english
are u sure u wanna read it..?
if u think u eng pro
see it lol
story ya^^
hey ya guys this is from the litter love novel that i have.
i have change it in english and litter.
see it when u guys have a free time^^
although it bored...^^"
hear what they 3 character in novel say....
tree,leaf,and wind...
tell me what u guys thinks!xD


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*TREE*
The reason that i call tree ,is cause i good drawing at tree.
and lately,i like to use use "tree" to become my nick name.
in 9th grade high school,i have 5 girlfriend.
have a one girl,i love her ,but i slow and i no have have brave to pursue her,
she no have a preety face,no have a nice figure,no attractive,just a litter common girl...

but i love her ,and realy.
love her nature,her quite frank,her cutest,her stubborn,her fragility

the reason i no pursue her....
maybe/is i feel that her to common and she dont match on me,
matbe/is i scard if we together,all the nice thing will change or disappear,
maybe/is i thought , finaly she was mine, so i not give up everthing fast for her.
And finaly because that reason,have make she stay with me for 3 year,made she see me playing with other fot 3 year
made she hurt for 3 year...

she realy a nice "artress" and i just like a burthen director for her..
i kiss my 2th girlfrind at toilet and she saw us in accidently.
she embarrass/shy and say :"Go on!" and she run away.

the next day,she eyes is red like a peach
i dont thinks who is making she depress like this ,laughing her for one a day.
when everbody is go home,i go back to class to pick my basketball for a contest practice
and i saw her cry alone in class, she dont know i was standing at the door,and i
was standing there to saw her cry for a hour..

my 4th girlfriend always dont like her,one day they both have a quarrel,
i know she is a person woudn't make something trouble but i have help my
4th girlfriend at the end ,when she hear the roar from me,
she shocked, and than the tear has falling from her eyes,i dont care she tear
and i leaving with my girlfriend.The next day,she still smile and joking with me ,
i know she was sad ,but she never know my heart is much painly from her.

when i breaking up with my 5th girlfriend,i ask she for hang out with me,
we playing for a day,and i say to her:" i have something to tell you."
she say:"how coincidence,i have something to tell you too"

"I breaking up with her."

"i together with his."

I know who is "his".he has pursue her for a while,is a litter cutest boy,
active,absorbing and hot,keep pursue be all over the town.
i cannot show my hurt ,i just smile and congratz her.
but when i back to home,i can handle the strongly pain in my heart,
like thousand of stone is falling to my heart.i hard to breath,
want to scream but i can't,..unexpectedly the tears has fall on my face,
and then start to crying...
is been many time,i saw her crying for the "PERSON" who dont have a breave to confessed too.

After the end of the school,i found a message in my hand phone.it come 10 days ago,that day i was craying.
i no see that message that day cause i no on my phone...
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*LEAF*
in high school,i love a gathered of leafs,why?

cause i thought,if a leaf want to leaving the tree that it was depend before,how brave it is!
9th high school ,i and a boy is a nice friend,is not like girl@boyfriend that nice,is just like
a good friend that nice.but when he has a girlfriend,i have learn a feeling that i should not to learn...jealous
that feel in my heart,is not just a one lemon can say it,that just like hundred of excess lemon,taste together,
x like crazy!!!
they both just together 2 month ,and when they breaking up,
i need to hide my strongly happinese in my heart,but over a month,he has a new girlfriend again.

I love him,and i know he love me too,but why his still would't move about it?
we obviously love each other,why he still no move for it?
evertime he has a new girl,i will feel a pain,one and one time again has injury me,
and that made me suspect,is me just a single love with her?

if he dont love me,why took nices on me? the nice he had done to me,is not a common friend can't do.
in love with a person,is hard,i can truely know he hobby,habit,anything.
Just he feeling to me,i dont know. want to me a girl to ask him?No!! ^^"

but whatever,i just stay with him,care about him and stay with him,love him,
maybe is like a move of waiting,waiting for him to comeback to love me,
just like everday wait his phone message at night.I know,
whatever busy he is,he will hang out some time for me.

That waiting,stay with me 3 year,waiting is realy hard,it will always made people want to
over it,but when the thing that wait has come ,made people still continue to waiting....

that tantalizing,that pain,that happinese,that contradiction,stay with me 3 year
After the 9th high school,have a guy in 8th class has love me,keep pursue me like a flame,
made i cancel him at the begin,have leave a litter heart room to him day after day.
he just like a warm wind and it long haul,keep blowing my hurtly leaf,
and finaly,i have thought i can't just leave a litter rooms to him,
i know this wind,will took my hurtly leaf, to a happinese place.

so i have leave the tree,the tree just smile,no ask me to stay.
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*WIND*

Cause my girl that i love is call tree,cause she has a tree that she love,
so i want to be a wind,a gust of wind to allways protect from any harm.

Frist time i saw her,is i was move to 6th grade 1 month ago,a litter
shorty her is sit at the basketball-court,she twins eyes is looks my sport leader.
evertime in the sport time, she eyes will always looks him,when she saw he playing
with other girl,she eyes will have a tear.when he saw her,she eyes will change it to smile.
looks her is become my habit,just like she love him.

oneday she would't come to court,my heart is never feel like this...intranquil and...i cannot explaine
that feeling,and the leader would't right here also!
i can stand it so i run to they class,and hide at out side,and i saw the leader roar her,her cry,
his leaving.

the next day,she still sit at the court like same,i saw her,and go in front to her,
smiling to her and i give a scrip *a litter paper with a shorty message* to her.She shocked at frist,
and than she smile and take it.
next day,she appeared in front on me and give me a scrip and she leaving.
*the heart in leaf is too heavy,wind cannot blow it*

*is not cause the heart in leaf is heavy,it just the leaf dont want to leave the tree at all*
when i replay that message to her,she start talking to me,receving my gift,reciving my phone call.

i know the person she love is not me,but if i would't give up and i will made her to love me.
in 4 month i have say "i love u" about 20 times to her,but everytime she hear this will talk
the otherthing,but i still wouldn't give up,the girl i have decide,i will make she love me!

up to the day i dont know how many time i say,i say it again.
although i know she will say the otherthing again ,but i still have litter hope that she will concent.
but this time she would't say anything.
"hey,what are u doing?why u wouldn't talking?"i talking to the phone.

"i nod."
"what??"i cannot belive my ears.
"i said i nod!"she sream.

i trow my handphone ,quickly wear the jacket ,take a taxi ,run to her house and click the ring
when she open the door...
that time..i hug her ..pressing

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Leaf has leaving,just cause the wing blowing,
or just cause the tree wouldn't want it to stay.






User Comments: [4] [add]
kookoo cupcakex3
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 11, 2007 @ 11:42pm
i like it its good.^^ u should write for a living.


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 12, 2007 @ 01:42pm
yes madammm crying



hail henry
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KaZu-93
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 12:30pm
It's very very good wink i heart love it. But u don't speak very good english... me neither, but maybe u should ask sombody to translate ur stories for u...? But the story was gooood biggrin


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 04, 2007 @ 02:46pm
yea i know i bad crying
ne~i know u master in english xDD
so can u help me at it? xDD



hail henry
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