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The story of an angel who just didn't belong
The angel with devil wings3
Tenshi walked down the street looking for Rainon. He wore a long brown coat that covered msot of his body. His wings were no loner out. He stopped as he spotted Rainon up ahead. Rainon just stood there, looking at something on the wall of a bulding that Tenshi could not see. As he moved closer he saw what he was looking at. A man was hung from the wall with barbed wire. Blood dripped from his fingers to the ground below. In the pool of blood was an open wallet. The ID was slighty pulled out and showed the picture that was not of the man who was now hung from the wall. "You b*****d!" Tenshi shouted at Rainon. He grasped the shoulder of his coat an pulled it off, revealing silver armor. His hand fell to the hilt of his sword and he drew it on Rainon. "Defend yourself!" He yelled as he charged in. His large wings completly spread out. Rainon covered the left side of his face with his hand. He stood there, chuckling at Tenshi's efforts. His chuckles soon grew into explosive laughter. He ceased all together and side stepped Tenshi's attack. His smile vanished as a thin line of blood appeared on his cheek. He touched the cut and stared at his own blood. It had been years since he had seen it. He touched the small spot on his tounge and smiled once more. Drops of blood began to fall from behind him. Tenshi couldn't see the origin of the blood. Rainon had a expression of sick pleasure plastered on his face. Two large bat wings brurst fourth from his back with a spray of blood. He moved with speed that could hardley be seen. In a split seconed he was right in front of Tenshi. He placed his hand on Tenshi's chest. His hand glowed menicingly. With a burst of energy, Tenshi's chest plate exploded. Tenshi stood hunched over. Shards of silver from his chest plate stuck out of bloody wounds in his chest. He looked up into Rainon's cold, lifless brown eyes. The eyes of a dead man. With a single swipe of his knife, a red line was drawn on Tenshi's throat. With his final harsh breath he uttered one final word, "b*****d." With that, he fell to the ground. His wings withered and died with him. Rainon just smiled the same sickiningly pleasurable smile of killing he had earlier. though he smiled, his eyes were just as plain as ever. The eyes, of a dead man.






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Fallen Angel Yami
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 05, 2005 @ 06:48pm
Your really good Ichigo. 3nodding You must have done extremely well on that one project in english. blaugh


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 06, 2005 @ 02:59am
3nodding



Hotaru Watase
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Prince Sorn
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 06, 2005 @ 09:58am
Thanks, but actualy, I didn't do to well. I got really lazy at the end of my story and it really showed. The last scene was pathetic. That's where I lost all my points. Also, if you didn't notice, the other entries were the begining of the story. Not sure if you noticed or not.


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