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My Thoughts and Prose I post poems and story ideas every once in awhile~ Maybe even some art. :3


[ Etienne ]
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Story Plots! <33
[+Mireille+]
Well...

The first one is about a world where your wealth and status of your family is dependent on how well your eldest daughter sings. The story starts off about a girl [who's name is undecided] whose older sister is a horrible singer, so they are poor and they are looked upon as beggars.One day her sister disappears and she is shoved into the spotlight, for she was the better singer all along, which her parents knew. After awhile she begins to realized her sister was actually murdered by her parents so they could get out of the gutters. Will she keep singing for her murderous parents or quit and go back to her state of poverty before?

Next story plot will be in my next post. xDD


[+Mireille+]
Thank you. Tell me which one I should write first. Second story plot! [I just changed it to a different one than what I was thinking] xDD

A young orphan girl is given a violin by a complete stranger one day, and year by year she learns how to play by herself. Marielle [That's her name xDD] plays on the streets for money now, but when one of her violin's strings breaks, she has no replacement. She pawns it off for enough money to eat for a year.

The whole story is her trying to get her violin back and trying to have a higher life. The theme is basically the kindness of strangers. 3nodding








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[ Etienne ]
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comment Commented on: Tue Jun 27, 2006 @ 05:22am
Polish those shoes put on those guns.
Until the fighting's over this war still isn't won.


comment Commented on: Thu Jul 27, 2006 @ 03:14am
This is a tough one because I like them both quite alot. I guess you just have to figure it out for yourself see which one flows easier from your mind to your pen to your hand. All I know is please post them here or somewhere (Tanuki maybe?) because I definatley want to read them both.



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