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journal.. thingy...? yea so random stories and s**t will go in here feel free to read and comment


Jamanda
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ramdom story
Random story part!!!

"the trees are talking"Elorah said
"what are they saying?" nicolaye asked looking up at the bilowing canope
"they are angry... i don't know why, it is said that only the lady of the wood can truly tell what they say..." Nicolaye noded slightly
"what of those called tree whisperers? what can they hear,"
"no one truly knows..." elorah replied closing her eyes trying to listen with all her mind as her teacher had taught her. wind blew throught her long tangled hair.
"and how much can you tell?" nicolaye asked
"as much as the trees alow me to know..." she said as the two continued their long walk.... the woods slowly began to thin out and eventualy disipeared leaving the two in a clearing. "good we are almost ther, come on" Elorah said taking nicolaye's hand and draging him along. she stoped when she came to a rocky cliff that decended into water. Elorah started to strip, first removing her weapon belt.
"umm what are you doing?" nicolaye asked her
"well you don't expect me to get my dress wet, it's a hot day and i need a swim!" Elorah replied, continuing to remove her dress. she unstraped a dager belt from each leg and drew a dager from each boot before romoving it. she looked up now in simple undergarmets "are you coming or not?" she asked nicolaye
"ah what the hell" he said and took off his shirt. revealing his strong muscular uper body. elorah smiled then dashed to the end of the cliff jumping off and diving into the water...

Please tell me what you think?






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Azazel Yarikh Faraoh
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comment Commented on: Fri Jul 21, 2006 @ 09:19pm
It's good, you should continue it! surprised


comment Commented on: Sat Jul 22, 2006 @ 01:18am
thanks you!



Jamanda
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Angelus_Ashford
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comment Commented on: Sat Jul 22, 2006 @ 01:23am
It's very good, this would make an excellent story, I spied a few spelling errors, and when you write this by all means feel fre to give details. Those are the only problems I see with it. 3nodding


comment Commented on: Sat Jul 22, 2006 @ 01:31am
thanks i know it's a bit vauge ut i wrote this as a stray idea flowing through my mind...



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