o.k here is somemore of the story
Nicolaye hesitated at the egde of the cliff. it was a long drop to the water. Elorah looked up and beconed for him to come as she splashed around in the water. Nicolaye backed up and took a deep breath. you can do this! he thought to himself and ran to the edge leaping off. he plunged into the water not far from Elorah. when his head surfaced he took a breath. "that wasn't so bad now was it?" elorah said in mock concern, as she slpashed around in the cool clear water.
"not bad at all" nicolaye said swimming over to her. Elorah's head disipeared under the water. nicolaye looked around, "Elorah?" he called, when she didn't reapear he closed his eyes and dove under himself. his eyes slowly opened and he saw Elorah swimming around the bottom. she had the grace of a swan as the curent moved though her hair.
that's all i have for now...
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