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Jamanda
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new story idea... like it?
o.k i just thought of this story idea i thought would be realy realy cool but i'm not sure... so i wanna know what you think.

setting, in an every day town, current time, a batle arena that is hidden in the forest.

A little back ground.... for many years now a secret socity has been holding fight's placing bet's and collecting minor bounties... this is a neighborhood "gang" i guess you could say although not very many know of them, init you can make chalenges, take chalenges, place bets and collect the minor bounties of the town. there are some rules though, when fighting, no Major injuries since it is a group of teens who don't want their pearents to know,
no sharp metal weapons,
you cannot bring anyone there without first getting the concent of blake, the guy who's 'in charge'

Plot, a teen girl discovers the club and wishes to join,at first she does poorly then after her first two matches, she slowly begins to climb the ranks, beating everyone except Flik, the reigning champion, who won't fight her,

characters
Mandy, tall straight shoulder length black hair with red streaks,, mandy is smart and a good fighter, she is also a quick leurner, and prefers to be alone. she works for herself since her father was a rug dealer and her mother was an alcoholic, she had to fend for herself throughout her life and leurned every thing she know on her onw.

Blake avrage hight, short spiked blond hair, blue eyes, a normal enfough kid, who's sole concern is himself, he juges the contests fairly enfough, but could easily be bribed with the right ammount of cash, he doesn't like the idea of Mandy participating in the arena but there were no rules that said she couldn't

Joshuahjaw length blond/red hair, green eyes, avrage hight. once again an avrage kid, he's a drug dealer trying to pay off a debt , it's thanks to him that Blake didn't simply say no to Mandy.he's not that much of a fighter, and prefers to coach and bet, but when he need's to his abilities are bested only by Flik, his best friend.

Flik, tall, musular, dark brown hair, hazle eyes, he is the best fighter in the 'club' he at first hates the idea of many fighting, but as she climbs the ranks he looks forward to fighting her, but after getting to know her he once again doesn't want to fight her due to his feelings for her.not much is know about Flik, or of his past...


i'll post the begining of the story if you like the idea mrgreen






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Angelus_Ashford
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comment Commented on: Sun Aug 06, 2006 @ 03:39am
Sounds very interesting, I wouldn't mine picking up this story.


comment Commented on: Sun Aug 06, 2006 @ 03:42am
glad you like it! mrgreen



Jamanda
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Azazel Yarikh Faraoh
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comment Commented on: Sat Aug 12, 2006 @ 05:17am
i like it.


comment Commented on: Mon Aug 21, 2006 @ 03:51am
hmm.....the characters seem good, but the profile. " Not much is known about him, or his past" that was first cliched from just about very dark character in anime. Some of the hairstyles also might be alittle cliche, trow some purple, and orange into it..



angelpunkchris
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Jamanda
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comment Commented on: Mon Aug 21, 2006 @ 04:36pm
you have a good point there...
and don't worry i'm gonna add another person in there, she's gonna have pink hair i think... as much as i hate pink stare


comment Commented on: Sun Nov 25, 2007 @ 05:05am
I wana be Flik, he sounds cool.



Linkg
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