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The story of an angel who just didn't belong
The angel with devil wingsAFTER MATH
A single man sat in a room. The room was dark. The lights had long since been blackened. Rainon sat upon a large thron in the center of the room. A few angels kneeled before him. Black bat wings folded on their backs. The prophecey had come true, but they had missinterpreted it. Rainon was the greatest angel and he was their leader, but he did it through force. He had long since purged the earth of sin. The imperfect creatures called humans no longer walked the earth. The world contained no more evil. For all of mankind was flawed and flaws must be destroyed. He looked out onto the land that now belonged to him. He ran his fingers along the hilt of the judgment blade with a triumphant grin plastered on his face. "You have conquered all, master." One of the angels next to him said. "IK have conqured nothing. I have merely freed the world of the darkness that loomed over head. I am this worlds saviour." Rainon had convinced himself what he had done was right and mabye it was. He had rid the world of evil, but only a few angels remained.

(It's not much, but I felt like adding it. And as a little something I've decided to only put this part on my gaia journal. My other journal will have a different ending. Mabye I'll put up the other one at a later time, but until then be happy with this ending. And yes, I did just kill of humanity.)






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Hotaru Watase
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 14, 2005 @ 07:24pm
What's the other username? I wanna read this other ending...

(He should have killed every last living thing on Earth)

(Then set it on fire to burn away)

(So that everything could begin anew)

(And then, kill himself)

(Because isn't murder a sin?)

(He should have finished what he started)

(He was the last sin)

(It would have been time to die)


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 06:03am
Here it is: http://vampirefreaks.com/journal.php?u=Bloody_Angel



Prince Sorn
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Hotaru Watase
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 18, 2005 @ 01:44am
Wow. The other ending... I liked the other ending better sweatdrop As in, not this one, the one on the Bloody Angel journal... Wait wait>.> Where did 'Rainon' come from? It reminds me of Demon Lord... Yeah. Post other stuff you've written too^^


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 30, 2005 @ 04:37am
I liked the other ending better as well, but my favorite was another I wrote in my journal, which a certain someone never gave me back. *Shifty eyes twords danielle who isn't on gaia* That's the ending I made after reading what you said. In that one he realizes that he had become tainted with sin and there fore takes his life. Did you mean the name Rainon or the character? the name was the result of me asking someone what a good name for a fallen angel was. The character was simply my imagination gone wild. My friend had drawn a picture of an angel with his wings cut off and i started to think of reasons that this may happen. Then I decided the devil wings would be more suiting. After that I just morphed him into a saddistic b*****d that might make some people like him. There's a picture of the character as well, but it's not online. It's in Danielle's sketch pad. I will post more as I write them. Or I may start some just online. And thanks for reading them and commenting it. I appretiate it.



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Hotaru Watase
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 31, 2005 @ 09:09pm
Yeah, I meant the name...
An angel, with it's wings cut off. That leaves a really interesting mental picture, I might attempt to put it on paper...
Well, thanks for putting them up=D I like reading other people's work.


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